abra
I don't think encore is exactly important to mention, but other than that, fine
aipom
don't mention return, that's aipom's niche ruined. The only coverage it mentions is knock off+u-turn, when I feel brick break, fire punch, seed bomb, and ice punch are kinda important to show it's unpredictable. I don't think ev spread is that important to mention (remember this is concise).
amaura
got snow warning since ORAS, so blizzard needs a mention, also got hyper voice>nature power. Also gets Earth Power + Tbolt coverage which is worth a small mention
aron (D)
seems fine, maybe just mention resistances to birds+normals is a key part of aron's defensive niche.
aron (O)
rock head + head smash should be mentioned.
archen (d)
it isn't the best at dealing with mienfoo, other than that fine
archen (u)
mention that berry juice can be used as well. mention its 17 speed tier, allowing it to outspeed pawniard
archen (o)
good
axew
good
bellsprout
'Bellsprout has seen a rise in usage thanks to the comeback of sun teams' - don't think threatlist is best place to talk about trends, cos sun is always something you need to look out for. Maybe just a sentence saying weather ball+solar beam+sludge bomb give good covereage
binacle
band/scarf+switcheroo set isn't mentioned. Cross Chop needs to be mentioned, as that's its main niche
bronzor
bronzor doens't get explosion so obviously this user had never even used the mon before writing about it. the description should be focusing on its ability to set up SR, and also walling flying types at the same time (particularly archen.) It should mention recycle. then at the end, should maybe say 'it's bulk can allow it to set up screens or raindance/sunny day/trick room, but it's slow and lacks offensive presence so isn't always the best choice'
bulbasaur
bulbasaur should focus on what it has over bellsprout, and that is bulk which allows it to set up growth. the last sentence is just fairly clunky. possible edit to, 'It also has good bulk for a sweeper while holding an Eviolite, which allows it to set up Growth easily.'
bunnelby
iron head should be mentioned for archen
carvanha
good
chinchou (D)
good. mention the types of threats it pivots in on, electric, flying, water types for the most part.
chinchou (o)
'thanks to the rise of threats like Fletchling' - not needed information. just change to thanks to its unique defensive typing, or smth. this paragraph doens't mention scarf which is dumb, and focuses on the fact it can use agility, which is a bad set. should be talking about scarf sets, or offensive berry juice 17 spe sets with hydro pump which acts as an offensive pivot.
clamperl
sub is mainly for sucker punch. maybe a small mention that clamperl is usable in trick room
corphish
superpower needs a mention.
cottonee
add knock off to the list of spport moves.
cranidos
this should mention the type of coverage that cranidos typically uses, e.g. zenheadbutt, superpoewr, crucnh, earthquake. the paragraph is in general a bit wordy, and sometimes repeats itself, e.g. talking about sheer force at the beginning then later on.
croagunk (o)
croagunk commonly uses EQ on physical sets to beat poison types, so that's a coverage that should be mentioned. other than that, great
croagunk (u)
just a mention that its priority allows it to revenge shell smashers. toxic probably shouldn't have a mention.
cubone
swords dance is bad, shouldn't be mentioned, and i think it's overhyped a little bit. cubone should only be running a 4 attacks set of eq or bonemerang/koff/rock slide/fire punch. this is really good coverage tbf. it's bad speed should be mentioned as a massive issue. mention it's a great TR/sticky web/baton pass receiver mon.
a few nitpicks for most things. bronzor needs a complete rewrite. offensive chinchou might need a rewrite. cubone needs a rewrite probably. amaura and cranidos might need a small bit of work, but the rest is generally adding 1 line/removing 1 line or adding/removing moves
e: apparently this was a 2k post, didn't realise. sorry if you were expecting something like a shoutout or w/e. I'm just so dedicated to LC that I wasted the 2k on this glorious threatlist.