Monotype Weavile (Dark) Done

[Splash]

[SET]
name: Revenge Killer (Dark)
move 1: Icicle Crash
move 2: Throat Chop
move 3: Foul Play
move 4: Low Kick
item: Choice Scarf
ability: Pressure
nature: Jolly
evs: 252 Atk / 4 SpD / 252 Spe


[SET COMMENTS]
With a high base Speed and Attack stat, Weavile acts as a huge threat and revenge killer for Dark teams. Choice Scarf Weavile is able to revenge kill an abundance of threats including Galarian Darmanitan, Swift Swim Seismitoad and Drednaw, and Ribombee. Icicle Crash is a strong Ice-type STAB that hits Dragon- and Flying-type Pokemon such as Dracozolt, Kommo-o, Togekiss, and Hawlucha that are all major threats thanks to their powerful secondary STAB attacks. Foul Play does far more damage to boosted threats such as Gyarados, Mimikyu, and Drednaw allowing Weavile to revenge kill them. Low Kick allows Weavile to nail Dark-, Steel-, and Ice-types such as Tyranitar, Bisharp, and Galarian Darmanitan for super effective damage, preventing them from sweeping its team. Maximum Attack and Speed investment alongside a Jolly Nature allows Weavile to be as fast as possible to outpace all other Choice Scarf users as well as be able to hit as hard as possible.


Mandibuzz is a great teammate for Weavile, as it can use Defog to remove all entry hazards and tank Fighting-type attacks, which all threaten Weavile greatly. Bisharp can deal with Fairy-types such as Clefable that Weavile struggles with breaking. Tyranitar is able to take Fire-type attacks directed at Weavile and set Stealth Rock to provide chip damage to further allow Weavile to clean more easily. Grimmsnarl also benefits from Weavile being able to get rid of Bisharp and Aegislash for it, which would otherwise impede a sweep. Hydreigon appreciates Choice Scarf Weavile's presence, as it can get rid of the faster Dragon-type Pokemon such as Dragapult and Noivern that can OHKO Hydreigon. In return, Hydreigon can use its powerful Fire-type attacks to break through defensive Steel-types such as Ferrothorn and Corviknight that Weavile struggles to break.

[CREDITS]
- Written by: [[splash, 437289]]
- <Dark> analysis by: [[splash, 437289]]
- Quality checked by: [[confluxx, 408641], [decem, 362454]]
- Grammar checked by: [[Eien, 100418]]

 

[mushamu]

Splashbrutha what’s the progress on this?

 

[Splash]

Forgot I’ll finish it in 1-2 days

 

[Conflux]

Low Kick is also good against Pokemon such as Obstagoon, opposing Weavile, Galarian Darmanitan etc. so I'd name the types it hits effectively and name an example for each. Include Galarian Darmanitan as an example because it's a huge threat to Dark.

Shorten the first line of the second paragraph, no need to say Weavile is a grounded Ice-type and therefore weak to Stealth Rock. Just say that Mandibuzz can remove Stealth Rock which hinder Weavile.

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[mushamu]

[SET COMMENTS]
Probably better to name some Pokemon that Icicle Crash hits super effectively and then name some types Weavile can take on well with it. I don't think saying it obliterates Dragon and Flying teams is the best way to approach it since both of them have some sort of counterplay to it.

Tyranitar > Obstagoon as something Low Kick hits.

"Choice Scarf Weavile is able to revenge kill an abundance of threats including Dragapult, Adamant Sand Rush Excadrill, Swift Swim Seismitoad and Drednaw.
Put this near the top, like as the second sentence. Describing what its main role is should go to the top. Also don't talk about Adamant Excadrill.

I don't think you need the last line, describing how Hydreigon can wallbreak some Pokemon that Weavile has trouble with is fine I feel, and its also notable that it can beat Steel-type Pokemon for it. Just go into a bit more detail about that and remove the line.

QC 2/2

 

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[SET]
name: Revenge Killer (Dark)
move 1: Icicle Crash
move 2: Throat Chop
move 3: Foul Play
move 4: Low Kick
item: Choice Scarf
ability: Pressure
nature: Jolly
evs: 252 Atk / 4 SpD / 252 Spe


[SET COMMENTS]
With a high base Speed and menacing Attack stat, Weavile poses a as a huge threat and revenge killer for in Dark teams. Choice Scarf Weavile is able to revenge kill an abundance of threats including Dragapult, Swift Swim Seismitoad Seismitoad, and Drednaw. Icicle Crash is strong Ice STAB attack that hits Dragon- and Flying-type Pokemon such as Dragapult, Haxorus, Togekiss, and Hawlucha. Throat Chop is able to clean up both Ghost- and Psychic-type Pokemon such as Polteageist and Indeedee. Foul Play does far more to boosted threats such as Aegislash, Mimikyu, and Drednaw. Low Kick allows Weavile to nail Dark-, Steel-, and Ice-types such as Tyranitar, Bisharp, and Galarian Darmanitan for super effective damage. Maximum Attack and Speed investment alongside a Jolly Nature allows Weavile to be as fast as possible to outpace the vast majority of other Choice Scarf users as well as be able to hit as hard as possible.


Mandibuzz is a great teammate for Weavile Weavile, as it can use Defog to remove all entry hazards hazards, which hinder Weavile. Mandibuzz It is also able to tank Fighting-type attacks attacks, which threaten Weavile greatly. Bisharp can deal with Fairy-types such as Clefable Clefable, which Weaviile Weavile struggles breaking. Tyranitar is able to take Fire-type attacks directed at Weavile and set Stealth Rock to provide chip damage to further allow Weavile to clean more easily. Grimmsnarl also benefits from Weavile being able to get rid of Bisharp and Aegislash for it, which would otherwise impede a sweep. Hydreigon appreciates Choice Scarf Weavile's presence presence, as it can get rid of the faster Dragon-type Pokemon such as Dragapult and Noivern which otherwise OHKO Hydreigon. Weavile benefits from Pokemon such as Hydreigon Hydreigon, as it can break through Steel-types such as Ferrothorn and Corviknight Corviknight, which Weavile struggles to break break, with Fire-type attacks.

[CREDITS]
- Written by: [[splashbrutha, 437289]]
- <Dark> analysis by: [[splashbrutha, 437289]]
- Quality checked by: [[confluxx, 408641], [decem, 362454]]
- Grammar checked by: [[<username1>, <userid1>]]

 

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[SET]
name: Revenge Killer (Dark)
move 1: Icicle Crash
move 2: Throat Chop
move 3: Foul Play
move 4: Low Kick
item: Choice Scarf
ability: Pressure
nature: Jolly
evs: 252 Atk / 4 SpD / 252 Spe

[SET COMMENTS]
With a high base Speed and menacing Attack stat, Weavile poses a acts as a huge threat and revenge killer for Dark teams. Choice Scarf Weavile is able to revenge kill an abundance of threats including Dragapult (Quality: this is not threatening to Dark. Use Galarian Darmanitan as an example instead), Swift Swim Seismitoad and Drednaw, and Ribombee. Icicle Crash is a strong Ice-type STAB that hits Dragon- and Flying-type Pokemon such as Dracozolt, Kommo-o Dragapult, Haxorus, Togekiss, and Hawlucha that are all major threats thanks to their powerful secondary STAB attacks (Quality. Old examples were bad, and everyone knows Ice is strong against Flying and Dragon. Should explain why these are noteworth). Throat Chop is able to clean up both Ghost- and Psychic-type Pokemon such as Polteageist and Indeedee (Quality: why is this useful for a Dark team that is supposed to be good against them anyway?). Foul Play does far more damage to boosted threats such as Gyarados Aegislash, Mimikyu, and Drednaw, allowing Weavile to revenge kill them. Low Kick allows Weavile to nail Dark-, Steel-, and Ice-types such as Tyranitar, Bisharp, and Galarian Darmanitan for super effective damage, preventing them from sweeping its team. Maximum Attack and Speed investment alongside a Jolly Nature allows Weavile to be as fast as possible to outpace the vast majority of all (Choice Scarf Dragapult isn't meta right now) other Choice Scarf users as well as be able to hit as hard as possible.

Mandibuzz is a great teammate for Weavile, (AC) as it can use Defog to remove all entry hazards which hinder Weavile. Mandibuzz is also able to and tank Fighting-type attacks, (AC) which all threaten Weavile greatly. Bisharp can deal with Fairy-types such as Clefable which that Weavile struggles with breaking. Tyranitar is able to take Fire-type attacks directed at Weavile and set Stealth Rock to provide chip damage to further allow Weavile to clean more easily. Grimmsnarl also benefits from Weavile being able to get rid of Bisharp and Aegislash for it, which would otherwise impede a sweep. Hydreigon appreciates Choice Scarf Weavile's presence, (AC) as it can get rid of the faster Dragon-type Pokemon such as Dragapult and Noivern which otherwise that can OHKO Hydreigon. Weavile benefits from Pokemon such as Hydreigon as it In return, Hydreigon can use its powerful Fire-type attacks to break through defensive Steel-types such as Ferrothorn and Corviknight which that Weavile struggles to break with Fire-type attacks.

[CREDITS]
- Written by: [[splashbrutha, 437289]]
- <Dark> analysis by: [[splashbrutha, 437289]]
- Quality checked by: [[confluxx, 408641], [decem, 362454]]
- Grammar checked by: [[<username1>, <userid1>]]

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