Snak's Poems

Yes, I am that puffle guy, I like poems, they are cool, so I made a thread to showcase my works, pls give me help to make them better, it will be appreciated :3
(inspired by I’m a poet and I gosh darn know it | Smogon Forums )

Title: Headless
I have to seek my head that has been lost,
I have to seek my head at any cost,
the Jack-o-lantern does not feel the same,
so, my head is what I try to claim,
if those mortals did not separate me and my head,
the souls that have faced me now would not be dead,
I did not want them to face my wrath, I really did not,
but because of my state, my temper is hot,
so please do not disturb me while I try to find my head,
for once it has been found, I can be free of dread.

Explanation: I had to draft a poem about how a myth connects with an experience IRL, so I chose the story of the headless horseman and how it is like losing an original item with alot of meaning (in this poem, the head), it can be replaced but it will never feel the same as the original.

Once again, please feel free to give me help to improve ^^
 

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Never gonna give you up
Never gonna let you down
Never gonna run around and desert you
Never gonna make you cry
Never gonna say goodbye
Never gonna tell a lie and hurt you

best poem ever
 

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