Playing better than your best: an Uber Warstory

[Kijin]

I liked almost everything about this warstory.

The fact that you knew each other's teams beforehand/had played each other before adds something to the story essentially no other warstory has. The battle itself was fast paced and exciting. Uber battles are significantly less common than the standard OU battle that is posted. The commentary is well informed and well written. Additionally, you chose to include a post game analysis of your team, explaining your strengths and weaknesses; this helps you as a battler and the audience in hopefully learning something from your summary.

Much originality/breaking of the norm, extremely readable and informative. Your warstory does everything that a warstory can and should do. Excellent job.

 

[obi]

I'll probably read this if you remove the red lettering for all of your comments. It just makes it hard to read.

 

[Articanus]

Fine. I chose a darker red.

 

[KO_King]

Very good battle, I liked the ending. ;)

 

[Articanus]

lol @ sig

glad to see you liked the battle. I hope that more people that see this warstory will comment on it.[/hint]

 

[darkie]

That was pretty intense. I really enjoyed the story. :D

 

[cheatscanner]

Might I ask

Edit: nVM


Congrats, man

 

[Articanus]

i'm still wondering what the question is lol

 

[milotic111]

Very nice warstory. Truly one of the better ones I have read the last time. You did an amazing job giving insight into your moves AND put it into a nice little story. Also the recap was unique, and shouldn't be.

 

[Tangerine]

I wonder how I missed this awesome warstory.

I think my favorite part was the stats roundup you had at the end. Very interesting!

 

[cim]

Whoa, that's a fantastic story! Easily one of the best I've read, like, ever. I love how much prediction and strategy Uber battles have in them, it's amazing.

 

[Articanus]

posts like these 3 make me feel all warm and fuzzy guys.... =D

keep'n coming!

 

[Himckyafi08]

Very nice, awesome predictions, great Pokemon, amazing overall battle! Thanks for the warstory. =D

 

[Sixonesix]

I've read a lot of warstories, but this is the only one I managed to read all the way through.

Congratulations, Articanus, you've captured my attention for a full 15 minutes.

btw I thought it was really good.

 

[Wedge]

Truely epic. A great use of 8 minutes of my life :D
That was some pretty impressive prediction and you formulated it well into a nice flowing warstory! 6/5 stars!!

 

[Articanus]

I'm glad I've provided the community with a very well liked warstory. =D

Realize that I played him over 4 times with the same teams, though, so it wasn't like I beat him every time.

 

[Great Sage]

This warstory seems to have received a lot of good reviews, and I like it personally as well, so I'll leave it here for a day or two and then move it to the warstory archive.

 

[Pimplup]

Well Articanus, congrats on having an awesome Warstory!! Sprites would have made it even more awesome than it already is. Good Job!

 

[Pyong]

Good feedback, greats predictions, original sets, no hax...perfect warstory imo.
BTW, so many not-ubers in this match :O

 

[Articanus]

This warstory seems to have received a lot of good reviews, and I like it personally as well, so I'll leave it here for a day or two and then move it to the warstory archive.

oh wow! Thanks for the heads up!

*goes to edit small typos*