National Dex Mega Lopunny [Done]

[Milo]

[SET]
name: Offensive
move 1: Close Combat
move 2: U-turn / Quick Attack
move 3: Fake Out
move 4: Frustration
item: Lopunnite
ability: Limber
nature: Jolly
evs: 252 Atk / 4 SpD / 252 Spe

[SET COMMENTS]
Mega Lopunny is a powerful, fast Pokemon that cements itself as one of the best all-out attackers in the metagame. It's a fantastic revenge killer thanks to its high-Base Power STAB moves and its ability, Scrappy. Fake Out is a fantastic priority move that inflicts meaningful chip damage onto offensive foes such as Dragapult, Iron Valiant, and Tapu Koko, putting them all range of Frustration. U-turn provides momentum and allows Mega Lopunny to pivot out of its checks safely, such as Landorus-T and Great Tusk, and bring in its teammates. Alternatively, Quick Attack can be run to enhance Mega Lopunny's revenge killing capabilities, which helps against faster threats such as Dragapult and Booster Energy Iron Valiant. Triple Axel can also be run over U-turn to hit Landorus-T, Garchomp, and Tornadus-T, though this forgoes more consistent utility. Mega Lopunny sits very well on bulky offense teams, as they benefit from its Speed and pivoting abilities. Therefore, offensive Pokemon such as Tapu Koko, Tapu Lele, Iron Valiant, Dragapult, and Weavile all pair very well with it, forming great offensive cores by wallbreaking alongside Mega Lopunny. Mega Lopunny loses to Choice Specs Dragapult, Choice Scarf Tapu Lele, and Zamazenta. Because of this, defensive Pokemon like Landorus-T, Heatran, and Gholdengo are appreciated in checking these threats; the former two also set entry hazards, further increasing Mega Lopunny's damage output in conjunction with Fake Out.

[CREDITS]
- Written by: [[Milo, 540138]]
- Quality checked by: [[adem, 529732]]
- Grammar checked by: [[Sulo, 528036]]

 

[Milo]

Ready for QC!

 

[adem]

[SET]
name: Offensive
move 1: Close Combat
move 2: U-Turn / Quick Attack
move 3: Fake Out
move 4: Frustration
item: Lopunnite
ability: Limber
nature: Jolly
evs: 252 Atk / 4 SpD / 252 Spe

[SET COMMENTS]
Mega Lopunny is a powerful, fast Pokemon that cements itself as one of the best all-out-attackers in the metagame. It works as a fantastic revenge killer thanks to its high base power STAB moves and its ability, Scrappy. Fake Out is a forceful priority move that inflicts meaningful chip onto offensive opponents such as Dragapult, Iron Valiant and Tapu Koko, putting them all range of Frustration. U-Turn gives Mega Lopunny momentum and the ability to pivot when it forces switches, giving it the edge over Landorus-Therian, Zamazenta Zama is faster and Great Tusk im ngl idk if this “giving it the edge part” is needed, maybe instead switch it to smtg like “allowing it to pivot out of its checks safely and bring in its teammates” or smtg of the like. Maximum investment in Attack and Speed is optimal for it to work as a fast, powerful revenge killer. Alternatively, Quick Attack can be run over to give Mega Lopunny extra priority as a revenge killer alongside Fake Out mention some examples of notable things you use it to rk, stuff like chipped val and pult. Triple Axel can be run over U-Turn and Quick Attack but it loses out on a lot of offensive utility mention what axel hits, and idt “missing out on a lot of offensive utility” is that good phrasing here, maybe just “…to hit XYZ, but at the cost of forgoing more consistent utility”. Mega Lopunny sits very well on bulky offence teams, as they benefit from its speed and pivoting abilities. Therefore, offensive Pokemon such as Tapu Koko, Dragapult, Weavile and Garchomp all pair very well with it, forming great offensive cores and allowing Lopunny to break alongside them. Weavile in particular, with a Choice Band, can work as an amazing wallbreaker alongside Mega Lopunny, acting in its role as a revenge killer what seperates band vile from the rest of the other mentioned? its a good breaker sure but not like, the best, and the description doesnt stand out, if theres nothing specific i think u remove it .However, Lopunny loses out against Choice Specs Dragapult, Choice Scarf Tapu Lele, Choice Scarf Gholdengo meh example, + u got enough alrdy and Zamazenta. Because of this, a defensive presence from Great Tusk very mickey as a defensive mon, and isnt a good check to any of these , Landorus, Gholdengo and Heatran can collectively shelter Loppuny from these overwhelming threats. Similarly, faster wallbreakers such as Tapu Lele and Iron Valiant can effectively check threats to Lopunny, working in conjunction as a great offence. this line feels a little weird, feel like the point being made here is the same to the previous one talking about koko pult vile and chomp. there needs to also be a mention about hazards, thats integral to the tier rn and a super boost for lop

[CREDITS]
- Written by: [[Milo, 540138]]
- Quality checked by: [[username1, userid1], [username2, userid2]]
- Grammar checked by: [[username1, userid1]]

overall quite decent job, great improvement, let me know when ur done w ur changes and ill see if i can let this pass w/o another check

 

[Milo]

Implemented

 

[adem]

REMOVE FORCEFUL.

1/1 well done

 

[Milo]

GP Team

 

[Sulo]

GP 1/1

bun bun

[SET]
name: Offensive
move 1: Close Combat
move 2: U-Turn U-turn / Quick Attack
move 3: Fake Out
move 4: Frustration
item: Lopunnite
ability: Limber
nature: Jolly
evs: 252 Atk / 4 SpD / 252 Spe Speza

[SET COMMENTS]
Mega Lopunny is a powerful, fast Pokemon that cements itself as one of the best all-out attackers (removed hyphen) in the metagame. It's It works as a fantastic revenge killer thanks to its high-Base Power high base power STAB moves and its ability, Scrappy. Fake Out is a fantastic priority move that inflicts meaningful chip damage onto offensive foes opponents such as Dragapult, Iron Valiant, (ac) and Tapu Koko, putting them all range of Frustration. U-turn provides momentum U-Turn gives Mega Lopunny momentum and allows Mega Lopunny it to pivot out of its checks safely, such as Landorus-Therian and Great Tusk, and bring in its teammates. Alternatively, Quick Attack can be run to enhance Mega Lopunny's revenge killing capabilities, which helps over to give Mega Lopunny extra priority as a revenge killer alongside Fake Out against faster threats such as Dragapult and Booster Energy Iron Valiant. Triple Axel can also be run over U-turn U-Turn and Quick Attack to effectively hit Landorus-Therian, Garchomp, and Tornadus-Therian, (ac) though this forgoes but at the cost of forgoing more consistent utility. Mega Lopunny sits very well on bulky offense offence teams, as they benefit from its Speed speed and pivoting abilities. Therefore, offensive Pokemon such as Tapu Koko, Tapu Lele, Iron Valiant, Dragapult and Weavile all pair very well with it, forming great offensive cores by wallbreaking and allowing Lopunny to break alongside Mega Lopunny them. However, Mega Lopunny loses to out against Choice Specs Dragapult, Choice Scarf Tapu Lele, and Zamazenta. Because of this, defensive Pokemon like Landorus-T, Heatran, and Gholdengo are appreciated in checking these threats; the former two also a defensive presence from Landorus-Therian, Gholdengo and Heatran can collectively shelter it from these overwhelming threats, as well as set entry hazards, (ac) further increasing to further increase Mega Lopunny's damage output in conjunction with Fake Out.

[CREDITS]
- Written by: [[Milo, 540138]]
- Quality checked by: [[adem, 529732]], [username2, userid2]]
- Grammar checked by: [[Sulo, 528036]]

GP Team done

 

[Milo]

Done

 

[Sulo]

up https://www.smogon.com/dex/sv/pokemon/lopunny/