Hopefully my comeback team.

This is my first real attempt to get back into pokes after not battling for a few months. So obviously my team building skills aren't what they used to be so please rate it and make some viable changes. I made this team around subcune, or at least make sweeping easier for him.



Team at a glance:






Bronzong @ Leftovers
Ability: Levitate
EVs: 252 HP/80 Atk/50 Def/128 SDef
Relaxed nature (+Def, -Spd)
- Explosion
- Gyro Ball
- Stealth Rock
- Earthquake
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My lead, the good old Bronzong ^_^. Ev spread is bad I know, simply made something up here. Replaced Grass knot with Eq for Boah etc, since ive got celebi now for pert/hippo. Counters Mence/Mamo/Deo etc, gets his rocks up and assplodes.




Heatran (M) @ Leftovers
Ability: Flash Fire
EVs: 6 HP/252 Spd/252 SAtk
Timid nature (+Spd, -Atk)
- Earth Power
- Flamethrower
- Substitute
- Toxic

Best Heatran set imo, lures Vaporeon/Gyarados/Blissey and toxics them. I'll switch to Scizor if Blissey breaks my sub and pursuit it, so it can't do anything else in the battle. Vaporeon toxiced = Suicune sweeping hella easier.


Scizor (M) @ Choice Band
Ability: Technician
EVs: 6 HP/252 Atk/252 Spd
Adamant nature (+Atk, -SAtk)
- Bullet Punch
- U-turn
- Pursuit
- Superpower
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My trapper, takes out Hp fire less Celebi,Blissey,Cress etc. I love the Sword Dance set but I really needed Pursuit so I decided to make it CB. Cb Bullet Punch for late game obviously.


Suicune @ Leftovers
Ability: Pressure
EVs: 252 HP/164 Spd/94 SAtk
Modest nature (+SAtk, -Atk)
- Calm Mind
- Ice Beam
- Surf
- Substitute
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The star ^_^. I used to make a lot of toxic stalling teams with Suicune as sweeper but it gets harder and harder to get both layers on the field and if that happen Suicune is basicly srewed =/. I've tried my current toxic/pursuiting strat and it works better imo.


Zapdos @ Leftovers
Ability: Pressure
EVs: 196 HP/18 Def/44 Spd/252 SDef
Modest nature (+SAtk, -Atk)
- Discharge
- Heat Wave
- Roost
- Hidden Power [Grass]
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Sweeping Zapdos with some bulk, love it.



Celebi @ Leftovers
Ability: Natural Cure
EVs: 78 HP/180 Spd/252 SAtk
Timid nature (+Spd, -Atk)
- Earth Power
- Grass Knot
- Hidden Power [Fire]
- Trick
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My replacement for Kingdra, takes scizor down almost every match xD, not sure about scarfing her tho, might get a bulky/cm version. Ev spread might look weird at first, but I need timid and 180 speed to oustpeed Jolly Lucario when Im not holding my scarf anymore.



So this is my first real team in ages, hope it isn't too bad lol. I've had some problems with Zapdos (a bit) and jolly Sd Luca could give me some serious problems.. Anyways rate away and make this team ladder worthy xD.
 
Might wanna replace yawn for raindance on kingdra, because when rains up he gets alot faster and stronger. Suicine also benefits from the rainsomewhat
 
hm, offensive gyara weak stands out early on.. zapdos is ohkod by se after a dd. apart form that you have a pretty cool team/strat. fighters are annoying since your zapdos isn't all that bulky and it's your only resist..

running calm mind celebi over kingdra actually works decently overall since you can afford the ice weak, but smart heatrans will put the pressure on suicune when they realize it's your only switch into them. Another idea is running a bulky dd+roost salamence @lum berry over kingdra. extra sr weak is annoying but it gives you a good switch into non hp ice heatrans (alot are running electric these day) as well as most fighters. Ice punch/stone edge Lucario will mess your stuff up though. gyara over kindgra on the other hand gives you more zapdos problems. mence+scarfing heatran will give you some more insurance i like the heatran/suicune synergy.. try stuff out anyways =)
 
hm, offensive gyara weak stands out early on.. zapdos is ohkod by se after a dd. apart form that you have a pretty cool team/strat. fighters are annoying since your zapdos isn't all that bulky and it's your only resist..

running calm mind celebi over kingdra actually works decently overall since you can afford the ice weak, but smart heatrans will put the pressure on suicune when they realize it's your only switch into them. Another idea is running a bulky dd+roost salamence @lum berry over kingdra. extra sr weak is annoying but it gives you a good switch into non hp ice heatrans (alot are running electric these day) as well as most fighters. Ice punch/stone edge Lucario will mess your stuff up though. gyara over kindgra on the other hand gives you more zapdos problems. mence+scarfing heatran will give you some more insurance i like the heatran/suicune synergy.. try stuff out anyways =)
thanks for the rate,gave me some good ideas. Im most certainly replacing Kindgra for Celebi now, just the set is kinda of a problem. It's either gonna be something like this:

Celebi @ Choice Scarf
Timid Nature
252 Speed/252 Sp Atk
Trick
Earth Power
Grass Knot
Hp Fire

Would give me a unexpected kill on heatran, which is obviously really nice, and also can revenge kill a lot of pokes and if Blissey for some reason did survive I can always Trick a Choice Scarf on here. Or I would ues the calm mind you stated... not sure yet, going to test both.
 
Bump... I made some changes but Im sure the team can still be a lot better then now... still need your help!
 

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