Vineon said:
I didnt think stuff like whirlwind being 85% accurate matter... since in fact, it does not.
same thing for stuff like Counter scoring a "critical hit"
You could just tag stuff like that as "useless," or just have a separate section for "Stuff that is different, but you'd never realize/care about."
Since I feel like picking on syntax:
Throughout the entire document, Pokémon is spelled without the accent mark over the e. Also, Pokémon is already plural, and thus use of "Pokemons" is not necessary. Anything relating to the spelling of "Pokémon" or any forms of it will be ignored from this point onward.
There are a lot of what I feel to be unnecessary capitalizations. In-game terms, like Attack, Speed and Special, as well as the names of Attacks and Pokémon should be left that way, but terms like "base stat" and "ratio" which are never used in game as caps shouldn't be. (Ratio is used, but the game never gives it the magical "all-caps status" that it gives to WEEDLE who learns STRING SHOT and POISON STING.)
I may repeat things that have already been mentioned.
I probably missed a few things.
Special Stat
An ampersand is used.
GSC is an acronym and should be capitalized.
Critical Hits
RBY is an acronym and every letter of it should be capitalized.
Ratio is given unnecessary capitalization.
Addition is capitalized.
Critical hits don't double the damage dealt, they double your level when calculating damage.
High Critical Hit Moves
High and Moves don't need capitalization, and when Critical is used without Hit, I'm not sure it needs it either.
Freezes
There
are only two ways to thaw, since you're applying that verb to two ways, rather than one. Also, "those" should be used to refer to the two ways, rather than "that."
One-Hit-KO Attacks
OHKO is an acronym and should be capitalized.
Trapping Moves
An ampersand is used. In the first complete sentence, "prevent" should be changed to "prevents."
There is a space before a colon.
I'm pretty sure immobilized should be spelled with a "z," even if "immobilised" is technically correct, the game spells it with a "z."
The last two sentences of the first paragraph should be combined, and "however" should be used to start the sentence.
The second paragraph has some really awkward comma usage.
Type Effectiveness Differences
There's a space before the colon.
Type Effectiveness Differences
The game doesn't capitalize all the words in the phrases "not very effective" and "super effective," and they shouldn't be here.
In the last parenthetical sentence, the first letter of the first word should be capitalized, and it should be punctuated, probably with a period.
Stat Changing Moves
The second sentence is a fragment and should probably be combined with the first.
If the word "Now" is going to be used to start the third sentence (ugh), it really should be proceeded by a comma.
Paralyze should be spelled with a "z."
The last sentence is punctuated by two periods.
Sleeping
The word "however" should probably be removed from the third sentence.
Hyper Beam
Substitute is a move name and should be capitalized.
Substitute
As I said before:
Substitute blocks primary status moves, like Thunder Wave and Sleep Powder. It does not block direct confusion moves, like Confuse Ray. It does not block secondary status, like paralysis from Body Slam or Thunderbolt. It does block secondary confusion effects, like Confusion or Psybeam. However, on Netbattle this is glitched and Body Slam can still paralyze through Substitute, and visa-versa for Psybeam. Since I'm not entirely sure on whether this is supposed to be intended for Netbattle or cart mechanics, I'm not entirely sure how to word it.
Reflect & Light Screen
It should probably be noted that lowering the stat in question (Psychic special fall, Screech) negates the effect of Reflect/Light Screen.
Roar & Whirlwind
Whirlwind is 85% accurate.
Dig & Fly
Forms of "paralyse" are used, which should be changed to use the spelling used in game. Also, Fly should be capitalized, since it's a move name.
Glare
Paralyze.
Leech Seed
HP does not need to be pluralized.
Thunder
Paralyzes.
Recovering Moves Failing
Two ellipses are used after "fail," only one is necessary.