BH Vitrification order (regenvest pert) [Done]

[Notgamingreally]

[SET]
RegenVest (Swampert-Mega) @ Assault Vest
Ability: Regenerator
EVs: 252 HP / 252 Atk / 252 Def / 252 SpD
Sassy Nature
IVs: 0 Spe
- Flip Turn
- Precipice Blades / Earthquake
- Knock Off
- Mortal Spin / Stone Axe

[SET COMMENTS]
RegenVest Mega Swampert is a reliable pivot with a strong advantage against Pokemon like Miraidon and Eternatus. Precipice Blade's high Base Power is generally preferred; however, Earthquake doesn’t miss. Mortal Spin can remove entry hazards particularly well thanks to Mega Swampert's Ground-type STAB move scaring off Steel-types like Registeel, and its ability to poison pairs well with Knock Off, which removes Covert Cloak from foes like Mega Audino. Stone Axe allows Mega Swampert to make progress against switch-ins like Arceus-Ghost. Frail offensive Pokemon like Mega Lucario, Blacephalon, and Mega Alakazam appreciate Mega Swampert's utility and its ability to stifle fast Dragon-types like Miraidon and Eternatus that would otherwise scare them out, with Mega Alakazam crucially outspeeding and KOing Miraidon and Eternatus, preventing them from spamming Strength Sap against Mega Swampert. Because of Mega Swampert's lack of incredible bulk, it cannot be relied on to wall most of the metagame; as a result, partners like Ho-Oh and Mega Audino are useful help against stronger special attackers like Mega Alakazam and Palkia-O. Salt Cure and Celesteela also greatly annoy Mega Swampert, so partners like Miraidon and other Magic Guard users help. Mega Swampert can be Imposter-proofed with Take Heart Arceus formes with a held Plate.

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[SET]
RegenVest (Swampert-Mega) @ Assault Vest
Ability: Regenerator
EVs: 252 HP / 252 Atk / 252 Def / 252 SpD
Sassy Nature
IVs: 0 Spe
- Precipice Blades / Earthquake the order of the moves should reflect the order they're talked about
- Knock Off
- Flip Turn
- Precipice Blades / Earthquake
- Mortal Spin / Stone Axe

[SET COMMENTS]
RegenVest Mega Swampert is a reliable pivot with a strong advantage into Pokémon like Miraidon and Eternatus. Precipice Blades Blades's power is generally preferred, (ac) for more power however Earthquake can be used for more consistency won't miss. Mortal Spin removes hazards particularly well in combination with Ground STAB and Knock Off removing Covert Cloak from things like Mega Audino, supporting teammates like Blacephalon well thanks to Ground STAB scaring off Steel-types like Registeel, and its poison pairs well with Knock Off removing Covert Cloak from foes like Mega Audino. Stone Axe allows it get progress on switch-ins like Arceus-Ghost. Frail offensive Pokemon like Mega Lucario, (ac) Ultra Necrozma, (ac) and the aforementioned Blacephalon appreciate Mega Swamperts Swampert's utility and its ability to stifle Miraidon fast Dragon-types like Miraidon and Eternatus that would otherwise scare them out. Despite Mega Swamperts Swampert's bulk and typing, (ac) it cannot be relied on to check wall most of the metagame, as such partners like Ho-Oh and Yveltal help. Salt Cure and Celesteela also annoy it greatly, so allies like Miraidon and Volt Switch Eternatus are useful. Imposter-proof Mega Swampert with Take Heart Arceus Formes with a plate held Plate.

[SET CREDITS]
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qc 1/2

 

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Notgamingreally, post: 10016997, member: 658705

[SET]
RegenVest (Swampert-Mega) @ Assault Vest
Ability: Regenerator
EVs: 252 HP / 252 Atk / 252 Def / 252 SpD
Sassy Nature
IVs: 0 Spe
- Precipice Blades / Earthquake the order of the moves should reflect the order they're talked about
- Knock Off
- Flip Turn
- Precipice Blades / Earthquake
- Mortal Spin / Stone Axe

[SET COMMENTS]
RegenVest Mega Swampert is a reliable pivot with a strong advantage into Pokémon like Miraidon and Eternatus. Precipice Blades Blades's power is generally preferred, (ac) for more power however Earthquake can be used for more consistency won't miss. Mortal Spin removes hazards particularly well in combination with Ground STAB and Knock Off removing Covert Cloak from things like Mega Audino, supporting teammates like Blacephalon well thanks to Ground STAB scaring off Steel-types like Registeel, and its poison pairs well with Knock Off removing Covert Cloak from foes like Mega Audino. Stone Axe allows it get progress on switch-ins like Arceus-Ghost. Frail offensive Pokemon like Mega Lucario, (ac) Ultra Necrozma, (ac) and the aforementioned Blacephalon appreciate Mega Swamperts Swampert's utility and its ability to stifle Miraidon fast Dragon-types like Miraidon and Eternatus that would otherwise scare them out. Despite Mega Swamperts Swampert's bulk and typing, (ac) it cannot be relied on to check wall most of the metagame, as such partners like Ho-Oh and Yveltal help. Salt Cure and Celesteela also annoy it greatly, so allies like Miraidon and Volt Switch Eternatus are useful. Imposter-proof Mega Swampert with Take Heart Arceus Formes with a plate held Plate.

[SET CREDITS]
Written by:
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qc 1/2

Implemented Ty

 

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QC 2

[SET]
RegenVest (Swampert-Mega) @ Assault Vest
Ability: Regenerator
EVs: 252 HP / 252 Atk / 252 Def / 252 SpD
Sassy Nature
IVs: 0 Spe
- Precipice Blades / Earthquake
- Knock Off
- Flip Turn move to first slot
- Mortal Spin / Stone Axe

[SET COMMENTS]
RegenVest Mega Swampert is a reliable pivot with a strong advantage into Pokémon like Miraidon and Eternatus. Precipice Blade’s power is generally preferred, however Earthquake won’t miss. Mortal Spin you deleted something that wasn't supposed to be deleted here thanks to Ground STAB scaring off Steel-types like Registeel, and its poison pairs well with Knock Off removing Covert Cloak from foes like Mega Audino. Stone Axe allows it get progress on switch-ins like Arceus-Ghost. Frail offensive Pokemon like Mega Lucario, Ultra Necrozma, and Blacephalon appreciate Mega Swampert’s utility and its ability to stifle fast Dragon-types like Miraidon and Eternatus that would otherwise scare them out. Despite Mega Swampert’s bulk and typing, it cannot be relied on to wall most of the metagame, as such partners like Ho-Oh and Yveltal help this doesn't make a lot of sense due to pert's bulk being quite average (mainly relying on typing) and av more being a utility mon than an actual wall (again due to the average bulk). This sentence is also quite vague because it doesn't specify why hooh and ygod help and what they are helping against. You should specify stuff that benefit from pert being able to scout certain choice lock and absorb hits to slow pivot stuff in. Also need to mention something that can actually threaten said Miraidon/Eternatus because if they carry sap they can burn sap pp to sit in front of you so if team doesn't have either an actual wall or revenge killer you lose. Salt Cure and Celesteela also annoy it greatly, as such partners like Miraidon and Eternatus help Not sure how Eternatus is helping against either unless its specifically Magic Guard since it does middling damage to steela with Torch and hates salt, miraidon is ok. Imposter-proof Mega Swampert with Take Heart Arceus Formes with a held Plate you can also rephrase this part to add a mention how they can absorb knock and poison which pert despises.

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RegenVest Mega Swampert is a reliable pivot with a strong advantage into Pokémon Pokemon like Miraidon and Eternatus. Precipice Blade’s power high Base Power is generally preferred, however Earthquake won’t miss. Mortal Spin can remove hazards particularly well thanks to Mega Swampert's Ground-type STAB scaring off Steel-types like Registeel, and its poison pairs well with Knock Off removing since it removes Covert Cloak from foes like Mega Audino. Stone Axe allows it Mega Swampert to get progress on switch-ins like Arceus-Ghost. Frail offenwsive offensive Pokemon like Mega Lucario, Blacephalon, and Mega Alakazam appreciate Mega Swampert’s utility and its ability to stifle fast Dragon-types like Miraidon and Eternatus that would otherwise scare them out, with Mega Alakazam crucially outspeeding and killing KOing Miraidon and Eternatus preventing them from spamming Strength Sap at Mega Swampert. Because of Mega Swampert’s lack of incredible bulk, (AC) it cannot be relied on to wall most of the metagame, as such, (AC) partners like Ho-Oh and Mega Audino help against stronger Special attackers like Mega Alakazam and Palkia-O. Salt Cure and Celesteela also annoy it greatly, greatly annoy Mega Swampert, as such, (AC) partners like Miraidon and other Magic Guard users help. Imposter-proof Mega Swampert with Take Heart Arceus Formes with a held Plate. Bit confused by this last sentence. Is this supposed to be a command? Cause if so, you should rephrase.

 

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[SET]
RegenVest (Swampert-Mega) @ Assault Vest
Ability: Regenerator
EVs: 252 HP / 252 Atk / 252 Def / 252 SpD
Sassy Nature
IVs: 0 Spe
- Flip Turn
- Precipice Blades / Earthquake
- Knock Off
- Mortal Spin / Stone Axe

[SET COMMENTS]
RegenVest Mega Swampert is a reliable pivot with a strong advantage into against Pokemon like Miraidon and Eternatus. Precipice Blade’s Blade's (wrong apostrophe) high Base Power is generally preferred, however preferred; however, (comma) Earthquake won’t doesn't miss. Mortal Spin can remove entry hazards particularly well thanks to Mega Swampert’s Swampert's Ground-type STAB move scaring off Steel-types like Registeel, and its ability to poison pairs well with Knock Off, (comma) since it which removes Covert Cloak from foes like Mega Audino. Stone Axe allows Mega Swampert to get progress on make progress against switch-ins like Arceus-Ghost. Frail offensive Pokemon like Mega Lucario, Blacephalon, and Mega Alakazam appreciate Mega Swampert’s Swampert's utility and its ability to stifle fast Dragon-types like Miraidon and Eternatus that would otherwise scare them out, with Mega Alakazam crucially outspeeding and KOing Miraidon and Eternatus, (comma) preventing them from spamming Strength Sap at against Mega Swampert. Because of Mega Swampert’s Swampert's lack of incredible bulk, it cannot be relied on to wall most of the metagame, as such metagame; as a result, partners like Ho-Oh and Mega Audino are useful to help against stronger Special special attackers like Mega Alakazam and Palkia-O. Salt Cure and Celesteela also greatly annoy Mega Swampert, as such so partners like Miraidon and other Magic Guard users help. Mega Swampert can be Imposter-proofed with Take Heart Arceus Formes formes with a held Plate.

[SET CREDITS]
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- Watch out for curly apostrophes ( ’ ); they should all be replaced with straight ASCII ones ( ' ).
- Do not connect two independent with just a comma unless a coordinating conjunction (for, and, not, but, or, yet, so) is being used; use a semicolon instead. (An independent clause is a clause that can stand alone as a full sentence even if you remove the rest of the sentence. For example, "Precipice Blade's high Base Power is generally preferred; however, Earthquake doesn't miss can be split into two sentences that make sense on their own: "Precipice Blade's high Base Power is generally preferred." and "However, Earthquake doesn't miss." This means a semicolon must be used or "preferred; however," must be replaced with "preferred, but".)
- Try to stick to using present tense.
- The first mention of "entry hazard(s)" in a paragraph/section should be written out in full and not shortened to just "hazard(s)".
- When "since" is being used to mean "because", it should be preceded by a comma.
- "As such" can't always be used to mean therefore/as a result; the "such" in "as such" is a pronoun, so it would only make sense in a context such as this one: "Ting-Lu is a Dark-type. As such, it is immune to Psychic-type moves.", where "such" can be replaced by a clearly pre-indicated noun (in this case "Dark-type").
- The "special" in "special attackers" should not be capitalized.
- "Formes", like in "Arceus formes", should also not be capitalized.

1/1 GP Team done

 

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[SET]
RegenVest (Swampert-Mega) @ Assault Vest
Ability: Regenerator
EVs: 252 HP / 252 Atk / 252 Def / 252 SpD
Sassy Nature
IVs: 0 Spe
- Flip Turn
- Precipice Blades / Earthquake
- Knock Off
- Mortal Spin / Stone Axe

[SET COMMENTS]
RegenVest Mega Swampert is a reliable pivot with a strong advantage into against Pokemon like Miraidon and Eternatus. Precipice Blade’s Blade's (wrong apostrophe) high Base Power is generally preferred, however preferred; however, (comma) Earthquake won’t doesn't miss. Mortal Spin can remove entry hazards particularly well thanks to Mega Swampert’s Swampert's Ground-type STAB move scaring off Steel-types like Registeel, and its ability to poison pairs well with Knock Off, (comma) since it which removes Covert Cloak from foes like Mega Audino. Stone Axe allows Mega Swampert to get progress on make progress against switch-ins like Arceus-Ghost. Frail offensive Pokemon like Mega Lucario, Blacephalon, and Mega Alakazam appreciate Mega Swampert’s Swampert's utility and its ability to stifle fast Dragon-types like Miraidon and Eternatus that would otherwise scare them out, with Mega Alakazam crucially outspeeding and KOing Miraidon and Eternatus, (comma) preventing them from spamming Strength Sap at against Mega Swampert. Because of Mega Swampert’s Swampert's lack of incredible bulk, it cannot be relied on to wall most of the metagame, as such metagame; as a result, partners like Ho-Oh and Mega Audino are useful to help against stronger Special special attackers like Mega Alakazam and Palkia-O. Salt Cure and Celesteela also greatly annoy Mega Swampert, as such so partners like Miraidon and other Magic Guard users help. Mega Swampert can be Imposter-proofed with Take Heart Arceus Formes formes with a held Plate.

[SET CREDITS]
Written by:
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/notgamingreally.658705/
Quality checked by:
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- Watch out for curly apostrophes ( ’ ); they should all be replaced with straight ASCII ones ( ' ).
- Do not connect two independent with just a comma unless a coordinating conjunction (for, and, not, but, or, yet, so) is being used; use a semicolon instead. (An independent clause is a clause that can stand alone as a full sentence even if you remove the rest of the sentence. For example, "Precipice Blade's high Base Power is generally preferred; however, Earthquake doesn't miss can be split into two sentences that make sense on their own: "Precipice Blade's high Base Power is generally preferred." and "However, Earthquake doesn't miss." This means a semicolon must be used or "preferred; however," must be replaced with "preferred, but".)
- Try to stick to using present tense.
- The first mention of "entry hazard(s)" in a paragraph/section should be written out in full and not shortened to just "hazard(s)".
- When "since" is being used to mean "because", it should be preceded by a comma.
- "As such" can't always be used to mean therefore/as a result; the "such" in "as such" is a pronoun, so it would only make sense in a context such as this one: "Ting-Lu is a Dark-type. As such, it is immune to Psychic-type moves.", where "such" can be replaced by a clearly pre-indicated noun (in this case "Dark-type").
- The "special" in "special attackers" should not be capitalized.
- "Formes", like in "Arceus formes", should also not be capitalized.

1/1 GP Team done

Implemented done ready for upload