LC Timburr

[Rei]

Timburr @ Eviolite
Ability: Iron Fist
Level: 5
EVs: 76 HP / 196 Atk / 236 Def
Adamant Nature
- Drain Punch
- Mach Punch
- Knock Off
- Ice Punch

Timburr has been smashing its way through the LC metagame like no tomorrow! Timburr separates itself from Mienfoo with its higher bulk and recovery from Drain Punch, which allows it to beat Pokemon like Mienfoo, Ferroseed, and Onix one-on-one. It also has great STAB priority in Mach Punch to take care of a weakened Porygon and Vullaby and coverage in Ice Punch to deter Foongus from switching in. 76 HP EVs along with 236 Defense EVs enable Timburr to tank a Brave Bird from Vullaby and KO it back with Ice Punch. Timburr struggles with Psychic-types like Abra and Galarian Ponyta, so Pokemon like Pawniard and Vullaby are useful to come in and threaten them out with their Dark-type attacks. Timburr also struggles to do much to Poison-types such as Mareanie and Koffing, so Pokemon like Porygon as well as Psychic-types such as Abra and Galarian Ponyta are appreciated to easily take care of them.

 

[DC]

The first part of the spotlight should be rewritten to focus more on Timburr's role over explaining Iron Fist and the moves (info isn't wrong, just wrong focus). For this spotlight, you want to highlight three different aspects of Timburr that separates it from Mienfoo: its higher bulk and recovery from Drain Punch that lets it 1v1 foes like Mienfoo, unblockable priority in Mach Punch (which is super important against god Porygon), and Ice Punch to handle Foongus. Tag me on disc or here after you have implemented this so i can give another read and stamp it.
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Burr

Timburr is smashing its way in the LC metagame like no tomorrow! Timburr separates itself from Mienfoo by having higher bulk, recovery with Drain Punch that allows it to 1v1 opposing Mienfoo, STAB priority with Mach Punch to take care of a weakened Porygon and Vullaby, and Ice Punch that allows it to 2HKO Foognus. (Break down this sentence into two sentences. Make first sentence about the 1v1 part and add other examples; make second sentence about Mach and Ice Punch and focus on how Ice Punch makes it so Foon can't switch into you) 76 HP EVs with 236 Defense EVs make Timburr able to tank a Brave Bird from Vullaby and kill it back with Ice Punch. Timburr struggles with Psychic-types like Abra and Galarian Ponyta so Pokemon like Pawniard and Vullaby can come in and threaten these out with their Dark-type attacks. It also struggles to do much to Poison-types such as Mareanie and Koffing, so Pokemon like Porygon and Galarian Ponyta can easily take care of these. (Generalize it to aforementioned psychic-types + porygon)

 

[deetah]

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Timburr

Timburr @ Eviolite
Ability: Iron Fist
Level: 5
EVs: 76 HP / 196 Atk / 236 Def
Adamant Nature
- Drain Punch
- Mach Punch
- Knock Off
- Ice Punch

Timburr is has been smashing its way in through the LC metagame like no tomorrow! Timburr separates itself from Mienfoo by having with its higher bulk, (RC) and recovery with from Drain Punch, (AC) that which allows it to 1v1 opposing beat Pokemon like Mienfoo, Ferroseed, and Onix one-on-one. It also has great STAB priority with in Mach Punch to take care of a weakened Porygon and Vullaby and coverage in Ice Punch that avoids to deter Foongus from switching in. 76 HP EVs along with 236 Defense EVs make enable Timburr able to tank a Brave Bird from Vullaby and kill KO it back with Ice Punch. Timburr struggles with Psychic-types like Abra and Galarian Ponyta, so Pokemon like Pawniard and Vullaby can are useful to come in and threaten these them out with their Dark-type attacks. It Timburr also struggles to do much to Poison-types such as Mareanie and Koffing, so Pokemon like Porygon and as well as Psychic-types such as Abra, (RC) and Galarian Ponyta can are appreciated to easily take care of these them.

 

[Eisenherz]