Metagame Sketchmons

[harmony96366]

https://pokepast.es/f76ac43fe39d48b5

Ive always wanted to try out a format like this, then realized this actually exists.
Sun team with a massive offensive core. Lorbtini in sun with v create or flare blitz depending on scenario, and precpice blades, volcarona spamming blue flare, and and leafeon, after swords dance, adds the control and alt to deleting things
Torkoal is a support wall that parting shots on everything, koko covers a lot of the team’s weaknesses, and lando covers a lot as well.

Opinions?

Edit: Team Updated
Edit: Team updated again
Edit: Another update, 5 life orb version

 

[Don Vascus]

https://pokepast.es/f76ac43fe39d48b5

Ive always wanted to try out a format like this, then realized this actually exists.
Sun team with a massive offensive core. Lorbtini in sun with v create or flare blitz depending on scenario, and precpice blades, volcarona spamming blue flare, and and leafeon, after swords dance, adds the control and alt to deleting things
Torkoal is a support wall that parting shots on everything, koko covers a lot of the team’s weaknesses, and lando covers a lot as well.

Opinions?

Edit: Team Updated
Edit: Team updated again
Edit: Another update, 5 life orb version

Why o why

Does victini have two fire moves instead of bolt strike


Also having u turn in a life orb mon seems like it causes more issues than what they solve, id recommend running glaciate to at least donk landos


Also i personally dont like mons that have to use double edge for coverage, so id recommend tangrowth as the chlorophyll mon over leafeon, even if it isnt as fast