Copyediting Scarf Enamorus (Flying) (0/1)

[CaptainDaimyo]

[SET]
Enamorus (F) @ Choice Scarf
Name: Choice Scarf (Flying)
Ability: Contrary
EVs: 4 Atk / 252 SpA / 252 Spe
Naive Nature
- Moonblast
- Earth Power / Mystical Fire
- Superpower
- Healing Wish

[SET COMMENTS]
Enamorus provides
excellent speed control for Flying teams, outspeeding and threatening a myriad of common threats such as Mega Altaria, boosted Kommo-o, Mega Lopunny, Hisuian Lilligant, and Choice Specs Greninja. Earth Power pairs well with Moonblast, hitting Poison-, Steel-, and Fire-types that resist Moonblast such as Toxapex, Heatran, and Cinderace. On the other hand, Mystical Fire targets the likes of Ferrothorn, Skarmory, and Corviknight, however Earth Power is preferred due to the greater number of targets it hits. Superpower not only hits threats like Empoleon and Ogerpon-C, but it can also help snowball through Normal and Rock teams thanks to Contrary boosting it. Healing Wish allows Enamorus to cure status and grant longevity to a weakened teammate. Gliscor and Landorus both provide entry hazard support and an Electric immunity, while Landorus wallbreaks to enable a sweep from Enamorus. Corviknight and Mantine remove Stealth Rock for Enamorus with Defog, and they can switch into Sneasler and Mega Swampert respectively. Mega Charizard Y and Tornadus-T both handle bulky threats like Mega Venusaur and Swampert. In return, Enamorus provides Healing Wish support. Mega Aerodactyl forms a great revenge-killing duo with Enamorus, handling threats like Tornadus-T and Galarian Slowking for it, while also appreciating Enamorus removing Choice Scarf Nihilego.

[CREDITS]
Written by:
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/captaindaimyo.602431/
Quality checked by:
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/mateeus.321991/
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/neko.542526/
Grammar checked by:
GP1 URL

 

[CaptainDaimyo]

QC ready

 

[Mateeus]

-> I think Cinderace is probably a better example than Torkoal as a target EP hits;
-> In the Contrary Superpower sentence, mention Superpower is able to snowball through Normal and Rock teams;
-> Saying "Corviknight handles Sneasler" and "Mantine handles rain teams" feels a bit too specific and crammed; you could generalize instead, saying they are able to switch into the likes of... respectively. You probably don't need to say the reciprocal sentence (In return...) as it's kinda implied already;
-> Mention another example(s) of wall zard/torn break thru for Enamorus, and remove the following sentence which is extremely specific;
-> Remove "Enamorus handles Greninja" as the most important thing Enamorus does for them is by far HWish support;
-> You can say Mega Aerodactyl forms a great revenge killing duo/core with Enamorus.

qc 1/2

 

[CaptainDaimyo]

-> I think Cinderace is probably a better example than Torkoal as a target EP hits;
-> In the Contrary Superpower sentence, mention Superpower is able to snowball through Normal and Rock teams;
-> Saying "Corviknight handles Sneasler" and "Mantine handles rain teams" feels a bit too specific and crammed; you could generalize instead, saying they are able to switch into the likes of... respectively. You probably don't need to say the reciprocal sentence (In return...) as it's kinda implied already;
-> Mention another example(s) of wall zard/torn break thru for Enamorus, and remove the following sentence which is extremely specific;
-> Remove "Enamorus handles Greninja" as the most important thing Enamorus does for them is by far HWish support;
-> You can say Mega Aerodactyl forms a great revenge killing duo/core with Enamorus.

qc 1/2

Implemented

 

[Neko]

enyamorus

[SET]
Enamorus (F) @ Choice Scarf
name: Choice Scarf (Flying)
Ability: Contrary
EVs: 4 Atk / 252 SpA / 252 Spe
Naive Nature
- Moonblast
- Earth Power / Mystical Fire
- Superpower
- Healing Wish

[SET COMMENTS]
Enamorus provides great speed control for Flying teams, outspeeding and threatening Dragon- and Dark-types such as Mega Altaria, Dragonite, Hydreigon, (Boosted Kommo-o, Mega Lopunny, Hisuian Lilligant. Doesnt have to be strictly Dragon and Dark at least) and Choice Specs Greninja. Earth Power pairs well with Moonblast, hitting Poison-, Steel-. and Fire-types that resist Moonblast like Toxapex, Heatran, and Cinderace. On the other hand, Mystical Fire targets the likes of Ferrothorn, Skarmory, and Corviknight; but Earth Power is preferred due to the greater amount of targets it hits. Superpower not only hits threats like Empoleon and Ogerpon-C, but it can help snowball through Normal and Rock teams thanks to Contrary boosting it. Healing Wish allows Enamorus to cure status and grant longevity to a weakened teammate. Gliscor and Landorus both provide entry hazard support and an Electric immunity, and Landorus checks (lando doesnt really check these things, just mention it wallbreaks for a Enam cleanup, also Hits Archa/H.Goodra Ig) Corviknight and Mega Scizor with Focus Blast and Earth Power respectively. Corviknight and Mantine remove Stealth Rock for Enamorus with Defog, and they can switch into Sneasler and Mega Swampert respectively. Mega Charizard Y and Tornadus-T both handle bulky threats like Mega Venusaur and Swampert. In return, Enamorus provides Healing Wish support. Mega Aerodactyl forms a great revenge killing duo with Enamorus, with it handling Tornadus-T and Gholdengo Galarian Slowking for it, while it appreciates Enamorus removing Choice Scarf Nihilego.

[CREDITS]
Written by:
Your Profile URL
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/captaindaimyo.602431/
Quality checked by:
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/mateeus.321991/
QC2 URL
Grammar checked by:
GP1 URL

QC 2/2, thankie Captain

 

[CaptainDaimyo]

GP Team

 

[RodentTamer]

AMGP here. Noticed that this wasn’t looked at since Monday. add remove comment

checked by the rat king

[SET]
Enamorus (F) @ Choice Scarf
name Name: Choice Scarf (Flying)
Ability: Contrary
EVs: 4 Atk / 252 SpA / 252 Spe
Naive Nature
- Moonblast
- Earth Power / Mystical Fire
- Superpower
- Healing Wish

[SET COMMENTS]
Enamorus provides great excellent speed control for Flying teams, outspeeding and threatening a myriad of common threats such as Mega Altaria, boosted Kommo-o, Mega Lopunny, Hisuian Lilligant, and Choice Specs Greninja. Earth Power pairs well with Moonblast, hitting Poison-, Steel-, (AC) (RP) and Fire-types that resist Moonblast like such as Toxapex, Heatran, and Cinderace. On the other hand, Mystical Fire targets the likes of Ferrothorn, Skarmory, and Corviknight, (RSC) (AC) but however, (AC) Earth Power is preferred due to the greater amount number of targets it hits. Superpower not only hits threats like Empoleon and Ogerpon-C, but it can also help snowball through Normal and Rock teams thanks to Contrary boosting it. Healing Wish allows Enamorus to cure status and grant longevity to a weakened teammate. Gliscor and Landorus both provide entry hazard support and an Electric immunity, and while Landorus wallbreaks to enable a sweep from Enamorus. Corviknight and Mantine remove Stealth Rock for Enamorus with Defog, and they can switch into Sneasler and Mega Swampert respectively. Mega Charizard Y and Tornadus-T both handle bulky threats like Mega Venusaur and Swampert. In return, Enamorus provides Healing Wish support. Mega Aerodactyl forms a great revenge-killing(AH) duo with Enamorus, with it handling threats like Tornadus-T and Galarian Slowking for it, while it appreciates also appreciating Enamorus removing Choice Scarf Nihilego.

 

[CaptainDaimyo]

AMGP here. Noticed that this wasn’t looked at since Monday. add remove comment

checked by the rat king

[SET]
Enamorus (F) @ Choice Scarf
name Name: Choice Scarf (Flying)
Ability: Contrary
EVs: 4 Atk / 252 SpA / 252 Spe
Naive Nature
- Moonblast
- Earth Power / Mystical Fire
- Superpower
- Healing Wish

[SET COMMENTS]
Enamorus provides great excellent speed control for Flying teams, outspeeding and threatening a myriad of common threats such as Mega Altaria, boosted Kommo-o, Mega Lopunny, Hisuian Lilligant, and Choice Specs Greninja. Earth Power pairs well with Moonblast, hitting Poison-, Steel-, (AC) (RP) and Fire-types that resist Moonblast like such as Toxapex, Heatran, and Cinderace. On the other hand, Mystical Fire targets the likes of Ferrothorn, Skarmory, and Corviknight, (RSC) (AC) but however Earth Power is preferred due to the greater amount number of targets it hits. Superpower not only hits threats like Empoleon and Ogerpon-C, but it can also help snowball through Normal and Rock teams thanks to Contrary boosting it. Healing Wish allows Enamorus to cure status and grant longevity to a weakened teammate. Gliscor and Landorus both provide entry hazard support and an Electric immunity, and while Landorus wallbreaks to enable a sweep from Enamorus. Corviknight and Mantine remove Stealth Rock for Enamorus with Defog, and they can switch into Sneasler and Mega Swampert respectively. Mega Charizard Y and Tornadus-T both handle bulky threats like Mega Venusaur and Swampert. In return, Enamorus provides Healing Wish support. Mega Aerodactyl forms a great revenge-killing(AH) duo with Enamorus, with it handling threats like Tornadus-T and Galarian Slowking for it, while it appreciates also appreciating Enamorus removing Choice Scarf Nihilego.

Implemented