OU Warstory: Dodging Scarftran

[Odinwolf]

great warstory. thanks for sharing. I really liked your writing style.

 

[the_artic_one]

Se, this is why bad warstories are unacceptable, this guy manages a near perfect, archive-worthy one on his very first post while I've seen awful ones from people who've been around much longer.

People need to take lurking lessons from this guy.

 

[VoiceOfReason]

I normally hate warstories solely about the very top OU's, but this captivated me, brilliant effort! Well done.

 

[JabbaTheGriffin]

extremely well done and well played. 5 stars!

 

[Stellar]

This is probably the most well-written warstory I have ever read. The predictions were fantastic and the commentary was entertaining.

 

[Tracker]

This Warstory has inspired me to SR for a Timid ScarfTran. Good job indeed.

 

[Invective]

You're not allowed to be that coherent and entertaining with your first post dammit! Nice job.

this.
youre putting a lot of people to shame by being this good iin one post.
definitely one of the best warstories ive read in quite a while. you had great prediction, and well thought out comments.
if i had a hat, id tip it.

 

[dirtybirdy]

He woulda won if he had fired off some random fire attacks with his heatran on your -relatively- obvious switches!

Not to down your story whatsoever, I definitely enjoyed it, good call on the team similarities.

 

[Unreal Ice]

Great warstory.

 

[jujuomi]

It took another 10% of Life Orb damage due to Extremespeed.

Oops I missed that. thanks for correcting me.

 

[Shigen]

This warstory deserves a 10/10. It was funny, captivateing, gave great insight to your thoughts, and all the rest of that good stuff. Deserves to be moved to the warstory archive, I'd say

 

[SubVersion]

Heatran: 100% health but very disappointed

lol

That was a really good battle and a great war story to boot. You've got an awesome writing style!

 

[Benefit]

Your opponent didn't play Heatran very good. Fire Blast would of still KO'd Jolteon so he didnt even have to risk a move not hitting, also dragon pulse isnt good on scarftran because its not strong enough for dragons. Good warstory though.

 

[Thunderpup]

This was a really good read.

The insight in the middle of the match was pretty cool.

 

[Stathakis]

it was a great story, but like some other people, I'm disappointed in the opponent's usage of scarftran. mmm, great story still!

 

[Mystica]

This war story shows exactly how noobs spam husk-alike teams and completely fail with them. itachi owns 109 used heatran so bad it was kinda funny. but overall nice warstory i loved your commentary!

 

[ChronoSquare]

You had me in hilarious epicness at the point YOUR Metagross exploded. But then it just got better in not only professionalism, but comedy as well. FALCON PUNCH, just brilliant.

Even though it isn't in the least, I know one way to describe your first post. In the words of a friend of mine:

"omfg hax"

You're not allowed to be that coherent and entertaining with your first post dammit! Nice job.

 

[BAD WOLF]

I vote one of the mods to archive this and may it be used as an example for all those wanting to post a war story.

 

[Tleilax]

His use of ScarfTran was pretty bad, but it was incredibly well written. Bravo, good sir. BRAVO.

 

[Blue Kirby]

I'm going to go ahead and archive this.

Well done, once again.

 

[Jibaku]

My goodness how did I miss this?
Nice commentaries. I loved the Falcon Punch and the disappointed Heatran. And there are probably more