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Buggy as Yonko... I feel like buggy as Shichibukai was earned b/c of Marineford, but this is just stupid and makes a joke out of the Yonko class. I don't care if Buggy is a former White Beard either-- if anything, the story needs to lean AWAY from the idea that status in the Pirate World is destined or bestowed by one's pirate lineage, not lean into it more...
 
I honestly wonder, if next chapter in a few weeks continues with Green Bull arriving at the party and clashing with Luffy or if we see a outside POV of Blackbeard reacting to Luffys win against Kaido and what his next plan/action is actually going to be. I can definitely see Blackbeard trying to get Pluton or the last unknown ancient weapon in his hands for his plan to become king of the world. Also Admiral downplayers who have them a level below Yonko really took another L last chapter. Sure, Queen and King were clearly still not near full health, but they still had no chance against Green Bull which just further proves that Yonko Commanders are just annoyances for the super powers who rule the One Piece world.
 

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Something that does nag at me a bit is how incoherently the dystopian nature of Wano was written specifically wrt how people view Oden / rebels in Wano. You can compare this to Dressrosa where Sugar's powers un-personed hundreds if not thousands of people over 10 years, literally erasing even the POSSIBILITY of resistance from within the country (even the dwarves, who retained awareness of the situation, seemed pretty hopeless until they had leaders come in from the outside).

This Potemkin town aspect is obv present in Wano with stuff like the SMILEs creating facades of happiness to hide misery. But if you think about it, in the 20 years Wano has been under Kaido's rule you could argue it's still a lot more resilient than Dressrosa.

-Dressrosa turned its back on its Riku (understandably so given the gigabrain strats Doflamingo used to take over) and never really gave that a second thought aside from one or two of the old guard who knew him well. Combined with the huge impact of Sugar's powers in altering the collective memories of people on the island, This didn't really change aside from the realization that Doflamingo was way worse as a ruler when he initiated the Birdcage (so it felt more natural that they accepted him back into the fold in the climax).

-Wano has a more complicated (and not in a very engaging way, I would argue) relationship with its ruler, Oden. Okay, so in the past they hated Oden because he was a huge punk. Then they loved Oden because he cleaned up his act. Then they hated Oden because he abandoned the country and his duties as a shogun. THEN they loved Oden when he arrived to take back Wano from Orochi--then they hated Oden afterwards because he kowtowed to Orochi and Kaido. But then they loved Oden again because of the reveal of the truth during the legendary hour (or whatever it was called). And when the Straw Hats first arrive in Wano, it seems like the country has gone flip-flopped again to hating Oden due to fake news from Orochi. Okay, but THEN, even in the TWENTY years that passed, the memory of the red scabbards and hope in the rebellion persists, even though there is a decent amount of attention put into the fact that Orochi and Kaido have basically taken control of the education system and media in the country and are teaching alt history regarding the Kozuki clan--so actually everyone in Wano loves Oden and has kept that alive.

It's a rather confusing back and forth that makes the real status of the Kozukis in the country kind of murky (and dampens the impact of the sudden freedoms enjoyed by the citizens, now able to learn the truth of what happened and speak their minds etc--was this truth really THAT hidden if basically all the citizens knew about it? It has more to do with the powerful choosing to deliberately believe in an untruth, which is realistic, sure, but operates on a different axis. It's not like we've really seen much of a comeuppance for the people who were Orochi / Kaido loyalists--effectively the entire upper class of the country???). ALSO... to be perfectly honest the way in which the Kurozumis were able to take over kinda feels dumb as fuck compared to what Doflamingo pulled. Basically all they had was one old lady who could match people's face and voices and they ran circles around the Kozuki so maybe they deserved to get some time in the spotlight after putting in that much effort lol.

-I am not the biggest fan of Dressrosa as a whole, but it approached this topic in a much clearer way than Wano did. And I don't think that is necessarily because Wano was so much more nuanced...it just felt like it was a bit of a mess from the start and Oda didn't completely know which parts of backstory and world building for the place would be relevant, so a lot got soft-retconned or thrown to the wayside. I also think in a bizarre way it kind of makes Wano feel LESS dramatic than Dressrosa in its reveal of the true nature of the country / its history. It would be interesting to imagine a story where the presence of failed SMILES and Sugar's power to mind-wipe were swapped in the story, for example. Obviously that would shake up the stories of each arc in HUGE ways...but I think it could serve as a more natural escalation of stakes with regards to the theme of false histories and dominant powers warping the truth (with the pinnacle of this of course being the Void Century reveals that we have been building up to since Arabasta).

In terms of intrigue and the military / politics / strategy, Wano stands out by actually portraying the massive amount of setup and subterfuge that went into preparing for the war and the overwhelming odds that were overcome to make it all happen. But from a world-building standpoint, I think Wano is honestly one of the weaker countries/ islands in terms of the way it presents its history...it just has so many moving parts and so many gaps that it starts to collapse under its own weight. I DO think there is much more that will be said on Wano (like why it has such close ties with the minks for example) as Oda reveals more about the Void Century, but I hope we can agree that falls outside the scope of what I'm talking about here.

This applies to its characters too, as a lot of the new ones introduced here are great but don't get much time to shine. I definitely prefer this to Dressrosa which also had a ton of characters but most of them were pretty lame or one-note...but yeah a lot of the new characters in Wano did not get their due. Hiyori especially got done so dirty...we're told she basically suffered through hell for TWENTY YEARS and became a glorified escort, performing for the man who killed her father while hoping against hope for the return of people to save her. Compare this to Momo, who yeah, is still dealing with the trauma of his parents' death (guess what, Hiyori was YOUNGER THAN HE WAS WHEN THIS HAPPENED) but gets SO MUCH TIME devoted to unpacking his trauma and overcoming it to become a leader. Yeah this is necessary given the huge role he has in re-establishing the Kozukis...but seriously Hiyori gets soooo little exploration in this arc. Oda tries to rectify this with her putting a seastone nail in Orochi in the climactic final act, but it feels so empty when Orochi gets free anyway and Denjiro has to come save her. It's not even like I LIKE Hiyori that much but it really feels like Oda is trying to have his cake and eat it too by having her presence in the story be really shallow but pretending there was all this epic emotional buildup for her when there wasn't at ALL (Another example of a character who I don't like but can see got done dirty was Ashura Douji...having him die really feels like Oda admitting to the readers he knows he was fkn ugly and least liked or something.).

It's easy to sling mud from the sidelines when this is by far one of the most complicated and grand plotlines in One Piece (or modern shounen for that matter). Of course there will be shortcomings! In the end, getting to read this arc week by week was a huge trip and I don't regret it one bit. Aside from people complaining about how the fights worked out in Roof Piece or whatever, I haven't seen as much discussion about how well Wano worked as a story about...well, Wano. There was a lot that I liked, from the stories of the generations of samurai who perished after being too impatient to wait for the Red Scabbards to the brief reflections on their death wishes before and during the raid, and much more that DID work for me. So I'd love to hear what yall think!

I honestly wonder, if next chapter in a few weeks continues with Green Bull arriving at the party and clashing with Luffy or if we see a outside POV of Blackbeard reacting to Luffys win against Kaido and what his next plan/action is actually going to be. I can definitely see Blackbeard trying to get Pluton or the last unknown ancient weapon in his hands for his plan to become king of the world. Also Admiral downplayers who have them a level below Yonko really took another L last chapter. Sure, Queen and King were clearly still not near full health, but they still had no chance against Green Bull which just further proves that Yonko Commanders are just annoyances for the super powers who rule the One Piece world.
I highly doubt it will go down like this, but it would be kinda sick if green bull actually succeeded in nabbing Luffy-which could put some focus on the crew/alliance members as they go to rescue him (maybe Kidd could help out too?). My actual prediction is that Shanks' presence will be felt in some form or another to defuse or alter the course of the conflict between Ryokugyu and the Straw Hats...it would line up well with the RED movie coming out soon.

Either way, excited to see how Wano ends. The scope and scale of the conflict felt suitably epic for the amount of time we spent getting to this point. Seeing momo return as the shogun was the cherry on top, though I was kind of hoping for some kind of...idk joint rulership between him and hiyori even though that rly wasnt foreshadowed... it would help relieve some of the annoyances I mentioned about how her character was treated in this arc.

tl;dr: I didn't really like how some of the aspects of Wano's history and its characters were executed compared to other similar arcs like Dressrosa, but overall I really enjoyed the arc and am excited to see where the next couple chapters take us leading up to the final arc.
 
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fuck denjiro camper ass bitch did nothing and then stood coolly after swiping once on orochi that should've been hiyori's kill but no i guess after 20 years of suffering we're to believe that hiyori's plan to kill orochi was 2 nails after some rubble falls on him

fuck denjiro camper ass bitch meanwhile izo fights 60000 enemies to let usopp escape then fights 2 cp0 guys and takes one of them down before dying himself izo noooooooo

fuck denjiro camper ass bitch meanwhile ashura doji actually attacks what looks like oden while taking a hit cos everyone is emotional and then jumps on a bomb and dies offscreen pell would've tanked that for sure


the 1 week skip really feels as if it was changed last minute to go on break on a cheerful note why do we get a total of 4 panels for izo and ashura's mourning kiku didn't even say anything. would've also liked usopp to say izo's name even once after being saved by him

anyone got thoughts on pluton? franky remembers the blueprints but it's "in" wano i don't think it's the actual ship but something significant that actually defines pluton as The Pluton
 

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I honestly wonder, if next chapter in a few weeks continues with Green Bull arriving at the party and clashing with Luffy or if we see a outside POV of Blackbeard reacting to Luffys win against Kaido and what his next plan/action is actually going to be. I can definitely see Blackbeard trying to get Pluton or the last unknown ancient weapon in his hands for his plan to become king of the world. Also Admiral downplayers who have them a level below Yonko really took another L last chapter. Sure, Queen and King were clearly still not near full health, but they still had no chance against Green Bull which just further proves that Yonko Commanders are just annoyances for the super powers who rule the One Piece world.
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We got a lot this chapter

  • Ryokugyu's devil fruit being logia type, possibly has relation to the forest god mentioned in skypeia i think
  • Yamato bonked Ryokugyu on the head so she'll get a bounty soon probably
  • Shanks and his crew going after the One Piece
  • Sabo likely being framed for killing Cobra and the disappearance of Vivi
  • Revolutionary Army declares war on the world government and attacked Marie Jois


I'm really excited to see where the next few chapters go
 

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OMG the new Admiral is like literally a Jordan Peterson fan or a Proud Boy or a Libertarian, or all of the above... it's like Oda tried to wrap up every meme and talking point from the Online Right into one character.
 
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Fujitora: Justice is the greatest degree of peace for the greatest number of people. (Left Liberal)

Sakazuki: Justice is absolute enforcement of the law, obedience to the world order. (Fascist)

Aokiji: ...Justice can be those things, and other things... it's a complicated world, and I'll rely on my judgement to find it... eventually... no rush you know. (Liberal)

Ryokugyu: Justice requires more than having an Ethno-State-- it requires a World Ethno-Hiearchy-Empire ruled by the Master Race. Facts over feelings yoh. (Nazi)

Kizaru: Ooh~~<3 (Acelerationist)
 
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and i thought sakazuki was a dick
aramaki's the closest in one piece to being a full nazi supporter

borsalino (isn't this the ppap guy?) sees the whole thing as a joke i guess
 
So is Nika just the Avatar state in OP lore? The fruit passes down former personality traits of its own to each user as awakened Zoan types can tend to do. Still, I don't buy the idea that Luffy was pre-destined from the beginning to this life. He very clearly states post Gear 5 awakening that he is the man who will be the pirate king. I still gotta figure out how much is the 'Will of D' and how much is Luffy's DF influencing his life.
 
if yamato is locked in as the final crewmate, what would his ranking/job be in the crew? we have the captain, swordsman, navigator, sniper, cook, doctor, archaeologist, shipwright, musician, and helmsman. would he merely be a second combat-only crewmate, or an officer of the crew? note that the straw hats' "ranks" are more like jobs, and they're organized more in the order they joined than power level.
 

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i would venture that yamato could be a good logkeeper - similar to Oden. Yamato obv has never seen the outside world, has a connection to Oden's journal, etc. Could be an interesting parallel, and would be a good dream of Yamato's to "complete" Oden's journal (given he tore out several pages). Since Oden knew about Pluton resting under Wano, and with Momo keeping Wano closed for now, this would also be a good goal of Yamato's so that they can discover why Oden wanted to open Wano in the first place.
 

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Overall good chapter, but that "Kurozumi were born to burn" line... I dunno Ota... nope, that ain't it, very cringe... saying a whole group/clan were born to burn? Even if they were brutal enemies of the people here, that's a biiiiiit too fasc/genocidy to acceptably be the punchline for a heroine. Not good, very bad.

If you were going to do this, needs to be a witty line connected to the fact that Orochi/Kaido also ravaged/destroyed the land & environment. Or something. This is just nooooooooo good. The evil needs to be about their actions/intentions, not about their last name.
 
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everyone who thought there would be redemption for kurozumi in some other way (i think tama was expected) have been facepalming for 3 hours

there's always the copout of "it was a retelling by that story guy, that's not what hiyori actually said" but that's what oda put in the manga for everyone to read so...yeah
also i get that there's some parallel with "oden was born to boil" but oden said that himself and it's 1 person vs the kurozumi which already went through widespread manic persecution

the yamato fakeout now just looks like padding up the panels, specially in the last two chapters. the character whose motivation was tied a lot with shouting "i wanna go out the sea" the whole time being like "wait you thought im leaving" my bad for assuming you wanted to leave i guess

ready for some fresh one piece adventuring tho please don't hurt me oda
 

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Shit ending lol

Did want to add that i saw some jp speakers saying that the kurozumi was born to burn line seems to be referring specifically to orochi, just like only oden was born to boil. Cant rly confirm or deny this but that does make it a lot less of a betrayal of one pieces themes! Doesnt excuse how damn messy this chapter was though ~_~

But ya on to the next arc! Excited to see what oda does w the lessons he learned from this beast of an arc
 
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Shit ending lol

Did want to add that i saw some jp speakers saying that the kurozumi was born to burn line seems to be referring specifically to orochi, just like only oden was born to boil. Cant rly confirm or deny this but that does make it a lot less of a betrayal of one pieces themes! Doesnt excuse how damn messy this chapter was though ~_~

But ya on to the next arc! Excited to see what oda does w the lessons he learned from this beast of an arc
How did they read it though? Online leaks are never posted in Japanese, and Jump doesn’t come out until tomorrow.

Whatever— I’ll admit I don’t usually buy Jump (I only buy complete books) b/c I don’t read any of the series besides OP; but this bugs me enough that maybe tomorrow I’ll go to Lawson and buy the Jump just to see what it actually says in the Japanese.

(For those who don’t know, I live in Japan and speak Japanese)
 

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How did they read it though? Online leaks are never posted in Japanese, and Jump doesn’t come out until tomorrow.

Whatever— I’ll admit I don’t usually buy Jump (I only buy complete books) b/c I don’t read any of the series besides OP; but this bugs me enough that maybe tomorrow I’ll go to Lawson and buy the Jump just to see what it actually says in the Japanese.

(For those who don’t know, I live in Japan and speak Japanese)
Yeah, thats what I mean by I have no idea where the info actually is coming from (they were quoting a line but no idea where they read it)--would definitely be cool if u are able to check it out directly
 

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Yeah, thats what I mean by I have no idea where the info actually is coming from (they were quoting a line but no idea where they read it)--would definitely be cool if u are able to check it out directly
「燃えてなんぼの!!!」「"黒炭"に候っ!!!」

Okay... this is some weird old Samurai speech or something (yeah Wano...), so I don't perfectly understand it. Honestly a bit above my cultural literacy.

"Burning" and the name "Kurosumi" (which means Black Coal) fine enough, but the use of Nanbono here is hard to interpret when I never hear it in a contemporary context, but it's like "how much" or "how many", but could also be "No matter how much". Here, like in many Japanese (especially old Japanese) sentences many grammar indicators are dropped (is, am, are, then, etc.) because you're expected to understand. So taking the leap, "No matter how much [pronoun] burns", here pronoun is not included so it could be "it" or "they" or "you"-- the subject isn't made clear, but essentially it's "Kurosumi" but again is that this man specifically or the clan in general or both?

And then "Sourou" here is super confusing because it's meaning is super hard to define. The sentence so far, literal translation would be "[No matter] how [much] [it/they/you] burns, the Kurosumi in [Sourou]!"
^[] around [No Matter] and [much] because while you probably can (and probably should) interpret those words as being there even in literal translation, that's not the only literal translation so not full confidence. [much] as well as [it/they/you] are not included in the sentence, but it is correct that (sometimes) you are supposed to interpret them as being there.

Next you have to translate and insert "Sourou". Possible definitions of the word Sourou:
-The state of things
-Season, weather
-Wait
-Question, investigate, aim for
-"is" or "is there" or "exists"

Now try putting any of those words in the brackets for [Sourou] in the sentence:
"[No matter] how [much] [it/they/you] burns, the Kurosumi in [The state of things]!"
"[No matter] how [much] [it/they/you] burns, the Kurosumi in [Season/Weather]!"
"[No matter] how [much] [it/they/you] burns, the Kurosumi in [Waiting]!"
"[No matter] how [much] [it/they/you] burns, the Kurosumi in [Questioning]!"
"[No matter] how [much] [it/they/you] burns, the Kurosumi in [exists]!"


gdamn you Oda... wtf is this...

I do think it's supposed to be the last definition ("is" or "is there" or "exists"), in which case it's easy to see why the it's easiest to translate this pretty-English-irreconcilable sentence as "The Kurosumi were meant to burn!!!"

but the moral weight that grammar carries is what seems out of place and what we're trying to avoid-- it's not clearly there (BUT IT'S ALSO NOT CLEARLY NOT THERE).

But I do want to give a charitable interpretation... so I feel it's more like...

"No matter how it burns, it's 'Black Coal' after all!!"

Also, I'm going to admit I didn't watch (this part) of the anime where Oden died, and I didn't read the manga in Japanese at all recently, so I didn't even know what the phrase Oden used when he died... so I tried looking it up... and yes it's the same grammar as here. "Niete Nanbono Oden ni Sourou."

And given Oden's carefree nature and bravery in accepting his own death with a smile on, I think it translates very well into "No matter how it boils, it's [just] Oden after all!"

And I added the word [just] here to emphasize the nuance I think is best imparted here. You could translate it as Oden saying that "Oden is meant to boil," but speaking of himself he's clearly not saying he deserves to boil as a moral judgement, but instead that it's obvious that Oden (as in literally the food) is [of course] boiled. Just as a matter of fact, that's how the soup is made and eaten. Just that he's talking about himself, and his death in the same matter-of-fact manner. I add the word "just" here to underscore the point that what Oden is saying is that it's not a big deal for him to boil, he accepts his own death with grace and without anguish or judgement.

Of course the sentences feel different especially after translation because "Oden" is just himself, an individual, and not "Kouzuki" which is a clan of people. There's no genocide against an individual but there can be genocide of a clan. There's not essentialization of an individual based on being himself/herself (you are who your are, living your own life), but there is bigotry/essentialization of characteristics to an individual based on that individual's group membership. A person saying he was "meant to" die this way, sounds really really different (especially in English) from a person saying a whole group of people "are meant to" die this way.

Regardless, if I try to translate Oden's phrase into a clear, colloquial English sentence and also replace the word "Oden" (Japanese hot pot in soy broth) with "Stew" to give us Americans the correct material context, it would be:

"So what if it boils, it IS stew after all!"

Then if I use the exact same grammar for Hiyori's line, it's:

"So what if it burns, it IS black coal after all!"

Which, does sound a lot less genocidal but still kind of gives me the creeps honestly. It is a lot better correctly contextualized and as long as you clearly remember what Oden said when he died, but it's still kind of cringe to me and honestly wished Oda could have come up with a better, morally centered phrase for Hiyori to yell to wrap up the saga.


edit: Also, when I asked my wife (who's Japanese) for her opinion, she said "My English is not good enough, and I didn't study Kanbu (classical Chinese) seriously enough in school to properly answer your question, so I'm glad you interepreted it for yourself. You're probably right."
 
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