National Dex Happy Hour Hisuian Zoroark

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[SET]
name: Happy Hour
move 1: Happy Hour
move 2: Shadow Ball
move 3: Focus Blast
move 4: Hyper Voice
item: Normalium Z
ability: Illusion
nature: Timid
evs: 4 Def / 252 SpA / 252 Spe

[SET COMMENTS]
With Happy Hour + Normalium Z, Hisuian Zoroark becomes a decent wincon, being given setup opportunities by baiting Pokemon with Illusion. +1 Focus Blast OHKOes Steel-types such as Heatran and Ferrothorn and Dark-types like Weavile and Mega Gyarados. Happy Hour Hisuian Zoroark is best suited on hyper offense teams because it can take advantage of dual screens to set up more easily. Hisuian Zoroark can disguise as Defiant Kingambit and bait Kingambit checks like Great Tusk and Skarmory. Tapu Koko can provide dual screens and pivot into Hisuian Zoroark against Pokemon like Gholdengo and Tornadus-T; this is best when Hisuian Zoroark is disguised as Kingambit or Mega Gyarados. Grimmsnarl is also an excellent teammate because it provides dual screens and lures and KOs Kingambit with Superpower. Tapu Lele appreciates Hisuian Zoroark beating Steel-types like Gholdengo and Heatran; Tapu Lele's Psychic Terrain also blocks Kingambit's Sucker Punch, letting Hisuian Zoroark KO it. Similarly, Mega Gyarados offensively checks Kingambit and wallbreaks early-game, letting Hisuian Zoroark sweep late-game. Dragapult can form an offensive Ghost-spam core with Hisuian Zoroark and appreciates it KOing Dark-types with Focus Blast. Entry hazard support from setters like Landorus-T and Glimmora allow Hisuian Zoroark to sweep more easily, since it struggles to OHKO most Pokemon even at +1.

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- Written by: [[georgebowserjr, 590164]]
- Quality checked by: [[Sulo, 528036], [Takatk, 595062], [2020 idm boomer, 385157]]
- Grammar checked by: [[Sulo, 528036]]
 
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Boomenheimer

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Hi George, I'm going to have to reject this analysis. There is quite a bit of content missing, as well as a few inaccuracies.

Let's begin with the missing team composition—it's unclear what type of team composition that this set fits on. This should form the basis of the analysis as it helps establish the teammates that synergize with this set—whether it's teammates that benefit from it or vice versa. In this case, Hisuian Zoroark fits best on HO, so this should naturally introduce discussion around common HO strategies such as screens setters, set up sweepers, etc. If it's being used on HO, does Focus Blast as coverage make sense over Flamethrower, given that it will likely be paired with certain teammates to account for its shortcomings in certain matchups? (See Mega Gyarados analysis for ideas).

Are there any particular teammates that it appreciates having in order to make effective use of its ability? Is it able to offer anything in return for said teammates?

Please set this thread back to WIP and try giving this another go by incorporating each of the aforementioned points.
 

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[SET]
name: Happy Hour
move 1: Happy Hour
move 2: Shadow Ball
move 3: Focus Blast
move 4: Hyper Voice
item: Normalium Z
ability: Illusion
nature: Timid
evs: 4 Def / 252 SpA / 252 Spe

[SET COMMENTS]
With Happy Hour + Normalium Z, Hisuian Zoroark becomes a decent wincon, being given setup opportunities by baiting Pokemon with Illusion. Happy Hour boosted Focus Blast gives the opportunity to OHKO Steel Types such as Heatran and Ferrothorn and Dark Types like Weavile, Mega Gyarados and Mega Tyranitar. Happy Hour Hisuian Zoroark is best suited on hyper offense Hyper Offence teams because it can take advantage of Dual Screens and Shed Tail. mention what cyclizar does for hzoro here Kingambit is a good teammate for Hisuian Zoroark because it can bait walls like Great Tusk, Skarmory. this sentence seems incoherent because kingambit itself DOES force these in, but it can't beat them. im assuming you meant kingambit is a good partner because hzoro can disguise itself as kingambit and can bait them and ko them. Tapu Koko can provide dual screens and pivot into Hisuian Zoroark against Pokemon like Gholdengo and Tornadus-Therian; (semicolon) this is best when Hisuian Zoroark is disguised as Kingambit or Mega Gyarados. Another great teammate would be Tapu Lele because Hisuian Zoroark can beat the Steel Types i cant use "I" or "me" like this mentioned before to make Tapu Lele a bigger threat. However, a massive threat for Hisuian Zoroark is Kingambit because of Pursuit trap and Sucker punch combination. In order to cover this threat, Tapu Lele can help cover it because it disables Kingambit's Sucker Punch and can knock it out. id rather list actual offensive switchins like mega gyarados and great tusk instead of lele

[CREDITS]
- Written by: [[georgebowserjr, 590164]]
- Quality checked by: [[Sulo, 528036], [username2, userid2]]
- Grammar checked by: [[username1, userid1]]
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1/2.
 

Taka

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AMQC so implement what u think is necessary


[SET]
name: Happy Hour
move 1: Happy Hour
move 2: Shadow Ball
move 3: Focus Blast
move 4: Hyper Voice
item: Normalium Z
ability: Illusion
nature: Timid
evs: 4 Def / 252 SpA / 252 Spe

[SET COMMENTS]
With Happy Hour + Normalium Z, Hisuian Zoroark becomes a decent wincon, being given setup opportunities by baiting Pokemon with Illusion. Happy Hour boosted Focus Blast gives the opportunity to OHKO Steel Types such as Heatran and Ferrothorn and Dark Types like Weavile, Mega Gyarados and Mega Tyranitar. Happy Hour Hisuian Zoroark is best suited on hyper offense teams because it can take advantage of Dual Screens and Shed Tail. Cyclizar can provide Shed Tail for Hisuian Zoroark and this makes it a huge threat. Kingambit is a good teammate for Hisuian Zoroark because it can bait walls with Illusion like Great Tusk and Skarmory i would mention that only having defiant gambit baits these walls since supreme overlord gives it away. Tapu Koko can provide dual screens and pivot into Hisuian Zoroark against Pokemon like Gholdengo and Tornadus-Therian; this is best when Hisuian Zoroark is disguised as Kingambit or Mega Gyarados. Another great teammate would be Tapu Lele because Hisuian Zoroark can beat the Steel Types aforementioned before to make Tapu Lele a bigger threat also mention how Zoroark disguised as Tapu Lele cannot be touched by Dragapult . However, a massive threat for Hisuian Zoroark is Kingambit because of Pursuit trap and Sucker punch combination. In order to cover this threat, Mega Gyarados can help cover it because it is a good offensive switch in to Kingambit. i would also mention Dragapult, as both Zoro and Pult can spam shadow ball together and act as each other, while Zoro baits opposing ghosts/darks and can nuke them w focus blast.

[CREDITS]
- Written by: [[georgebowserjr, 590164]]
- Quality checked by: [[Sulo, 528036], [username2, userid2]]
- Grammar checked by: [[username1, userid1]]
 

Boomenheimer

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add remove comment taka's comments

:sv/Zoroark-Hisui:
[SET]
name: Happy Hour
move 1: Happy Hour
move 2: Shadow Ball
move 3: Focus Blast
move 4: Hyper Voice
item: Normalium Z
ability: Illusion
nature: Timid
evs: 4 Def / 252 SpA / 252 Spe

[SET COMMENTS]
With Happy Hour + Normalium Z, Hisuian Zoroark becomes a decent wincon, being given setup opportunities by baiting Pokemon with Illusion. Happy Hour boosted Focus Blast gives the opportunity to OHKO Steel Types such as Heatran and Ferrothorn and Dark Types like Weavile, Mega Gyarados and Mega Tyranitar. Happy Hour Hisuian Zoroark is best suited on hyper offense teams because it can take advantage of Dual Screens and Shed Tail how specifically does it take advantage of dual screens and shed tail? Explain that it creates easier setup opportunities. Cyclizar can provide Shed Tail for Hisuian Zoroark and this makes it a huge threat. Kingambit is a good teammate for Hisuian Zoroark swap the placement of Kingambit and Zoroark in this sentence because it can bait its walls with Illusion like Great Tusk and Skarmory i would mention that only having defiant gambit baits these walls since supreme overlord gives it away. Tapu Koko can provide dual screens and pivot into Hisuian Zoroark against Pokemon like Gholdengo and Tornadus-Therian; this is best when Hisuian Zoroark is disguised as Kingambit or Mega Gyarados. Should also mention Grimmsnarl as a screen setter which bait opposing Kingambit and threaten to remove them with Superpower, easing Zoroark's ability to sweep. Another great teammate would be Tapu Lele because Hisuian Zoroark can beat the Steel Types aforementioned before such as add the list of steel types here to make Tapu Lele a bigger threat also mention how Zoroark disguised as Tapu Lele cannot be touched by Dragapult . However, a massive threat for Hisuian Zoroark is Kingambit because of Pursuit trap and Sucker punch combination from the previous sentence, you should mention that Lele makes a good partner for Zoroark in return because it blocks priority Sucker Punch from Kingambit that would otherwise threaten to OHKO. In order to cover this threat, Mega Gyarados can help cover it because it is a good offensive switch in to Kingambit. You can mention Mega Gyarados as also being a good teammate by that can break walls early for Zoroark to have an easier time sweeping in the late game i would also mention Dragapult, as both Zoro and Pult can spam shadow ball together and act as each other, while Zoro baits opposing ghosts/darks and can nuke them w focus blast. Should also mention hazard support to help Zoroark sweep easier since even at +1 it misses out on OHKOing a lot of the metagame.

[CREDITS]
- Written by: [[georgebowserjr, 590164]]
- Quality checked by: [[Sulo, 528036], [Takatk, 595062], [2020 idm boomer, 385157]]
- Grammar checked by: [[username1, userid1]]

QC 2/2, after a couple edits should be good to go. Be sure to include Takatk in the QC 'checked by' section.

 

Sulo

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[SET]
name: Happy Hour
move 1: Happy Hour
move 2: Shadow Ball
move 3: Focus Blast
move 4: Hyper Voice
item: Normalium Z
ability: Illusion
nature: Timid
evs: 4 Def / 252 SpA / 252 Spe

[SET COMMENTS]
With Happy Hour + Normalium Z, Hisuian Zoroark becomes a decent wincon, being given setup opportunities by baiting Pokemon with Illusion. Happy Hour boosted +1 Focus Blast OHKOes Steel-types such as Heatran and Ferrothorn and Dark-types like Weavile and Mega Gyarados. weavile is a much more relevant example than mttar rn gives the opportunity to OHKO Steel Types such as Heatran and Ferrothorn and Dark Types like Mega Gyarados and Mega Tyranitar. Happy Hour Hisuian Zoroark is best suited on hyper offense teams because it can take advantage of dual screens to set up more easily. Dual Screens to make it easier to set up Z-Happy Hour. Hisuian Zoroark can disguise as Defiant Kingambit and bait Kingambit checks Hisuian Zoroark is a good teammate for Defiant Kingambit because it can bait walls with Illusion like Great Tusk and Skarmory. Tapu Koko can provide dual screens and pivot into Hisuian Zoroark against Pokemon like Gholdengo and Tornadus-T; Tornadus-Therian; this is best when Hisuian Zoroark is disguised as Kingambit or Mega Gyarados. Grimmsnarl is also an excellent teammate because it can provide provides dual screens Dual Screens and baits lures and KOes Kingambit with Superpower. which Grimmsnarl threatens with Superpower. Tapu Lele appreciates Hisuian Zoroark beating Steel-types like Gholdengo and Heatran; changed to heatran because you need specific conditions to beat kingambit Another great teammate would be Tapu Lele because Hisuian Zoroark can beat Steel Types such as Kingambit and Gholdengo to make Tapu Lele a bigger threat and Hisuian Zoroark disguised as Tapu Lele cannot be touched by Dragapult. Tapu Lele's Psychic Terrain also blocks Kingambit's Sucker Punch, letting Hisuian Zoroark KO it. However, a massive threat for Hisuian Zoroark is Kingambit because of Pursuit trap and Sucker punch combination. This can be covered by Tapu Lele because Psychic Terrain blocks priority Sucker Punch that otherwise would be a threat to OHKO. Similarly, Mega Gyarados offensively checks Kingambit and wallbreaks early-game, letting Hisuian Zoroark sweep late-game. In order to cover this threat, Mega Gyarados can help cover it because it is a good offensive switch in to Kingambit, and can take on walls early on, so that Hisuian Zoroark can sweep late game. Dragapult can form an offensive Ghost-spam core with Hisuian Zoroark and appreciates it KOing Dark-types with Focus Blast. Dragapult can be a good teammate because it and Hisuian Zoroark can spam Shadow Balls together and act as each other and Hisuian Zoroark can bait Steel-Types and Dark-Types with Focus Blast. Entry hazard support from setters like ___ and ___ examples here allow Hisuian Zoroark to sweep more easily, since it struggles to OHKO most Pokemon even at +1. Hazard support is also useful to Hisuian Zoroark because it can help sweep easier, since even at +1 Hisuian Zoroark struggles to OHKO a lot of the metagame.

[CREDITS]
- Written by: [[georgebowserjr, 590164]]
- Quality checked by: [[Sulo, 528036], [Takatk, 595062], [2020 idm boomer, 385157]]
- Grammar checked by: [[Sulo, 528036]]
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