AG Gothitelle [DONE]

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[SET]
name: Choice Specs
move 1: Psyshock
move 2: Thunderbolt
move 3: Grass Knot
move 4: Trick
item: Choice Specs
ability: Shadow Tag
nature: Modest
evs: 252 SpA / 4 SpD / 252 Spe
tera type: Fairy / Grass

[SET COMMENTS]
Gothitelle is a wallbreaker that enables its teammates by trapping and removing various walls. Thunderbolt targets Corviknight, Alomomola, Toxapex, and Pelipper, while Grass Knot OHKOes Dondozo, Hippowdon, and defensive Great Tusk, 2HKOes Garganacl, and 2HKOes Ting-Lu and Iron Treads with Tera Grass. Psyshock is chosen over Psychic to more effectively remove Blissey and Clodsire. Trick is a decent midground option that cripples Pokemon Gothitelle might not otherwise beat, like Tera Steel Ting-Lu and Corviknight, but it comes at the cost of greatly reducing Gothitelle's wallbreaking potential, so it should generally be used sparingly. Tera Fairy is used to trap Miraidon, Walking Wake, and Koraidon locked into their Dragon-type STAB moves, and it lets Gothitelle revenge kill weakened Chi-Yu and Chien-Pao locked into a Dark-type STAB move. Alternatively, Tera Grass allows it to 2HKO Ting-Lu and Iron Treads while weakening strong attacks from Great Tusk, Ting-Lu, and Iron Treads. Gothitelle fits best on balance teams, where it can make powerful teammates like Miraidon, Koraidon, Iron Bundle, and Chien-Pao into wincons, since it removes many of their common checks. Gothitelle is frail and dislikes hard switching into the walls it seeks to remove, so it greatly appreciates pivots such as Flip Turn Iron Bundle and U-turn users such as Miraidon, Koraidon, and Corviknight. After Gothitelle has picked up a KO, many offensive Pokemon force it out, so standard defensive backbones consisting of Pokemon like Toxapex, Iron Treads, Great Tusk, Clodsire, and Skeledirge are vital.

[CREDITS]
- Written by: [[Geysers, 426798]]
- Quality checked by: [[pichus, 374620], [WrathoftheLeopard, 511181]]
- Grammar checked by: [[Adeleine, 517429]]
 
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[SET]
name: Choice Specs
move 1: Psyshock
move 2: Thunderbolt
move 3: Grass Knot
move 4: Trick
item: Choice Specs
ability: Shadow Tag
nature: Modest
evs: 252 SpA / 4 SpD / 252 Spe
tera type: Fairy / Grass

[SET COMMENTS]
Gothitelle is a threatening wallbreaker, trapping and removing common defensive Pokemon like Toxapex, Blissey, Clodsire, Corviknight, Dondozo, Alomomola, and Ting-Lu. this sentence doesn't make sense grammatically I think, also there's no need to mention the examples here because you will talk about them later on anyway. Just re-write this sentence and make sure to include that goth helps its teammates a lot by trapping and removing def walls, which is what makes it really good. Thunderbolt hits Flying- and Water-types, allowing Gothitelle to OHKO Corviknight after some chip damage, while also OHKOing Pelipper and having a decent chance to OHKO Alomomola. Thunderbolt targets Corviknight, Pelipper, Toxapex, and Pelipper while Grass Knot OHKOs Dondozo and defensive Great Tusk, 2HKOs Garganacl, and 2HKOs Ting-Lu with Tera Grass. if Gothitelle has Terastallized into the Grass type. It is worth mentioning that Psyshock is the choice of STAB because it 2HKOs Blissey and OHKOs clodsire [this is what makes it better than psychic which is its strongest STAB]. Trick is a decent midground option that lets Gothitelle cripple potential switch-ins uh, nothing switches into goth? I don't get this, but it comes at the cost of greatly reducing its wallbreaking potential, and as such should generally be used sparingly. Tera Fairy is used to trap Miraidon, Walking Wake, and Koraidon locked into their Dragon-type STAB move, and revenge kill weakened Chi-Yu and Chien-Pao locked into Dark-type STAB move. Alternatively, Tera Grass is Gothitelle's preferred Tera Type, allowing allows it to 2HKO Ting-Lu and weaken strong attacks from Great Tusk and Iron Treads. Gothitelle fits best on balance teams where it can enable powerful win conditions like Miraidon, Koraidon, Iron Bundle, and Chien-Pao, since it removes many of their common checks. It's very slow and Gothitelle is frail and dislikes hard switching into defensive walls, so it greatly appreciates teammates that can provide pivoting support, such as Flip Turn Iron Bundle and U-turn Miraidon and Corviknight. After Gothitelle has picked up a kill, many offensive Pokemon force it out, so standard defensive backbones consisting of Pokemon like Toxapex, Ting-Lu, Corviknight, Clodsire, and Skeledirge are vital alongside Gothitelle. absolutely not tinglu. You need a solid check to DD Mira, replace tinglu with iron treads for sure, add Great Tusk as an example, remove corv as it is mentioned earlier already.

[CREDITS]
- Written by: [[Geysers, 426798]]
- Quality checked by: [[pichus, 374620], [username2, userid2]]
- Grammar checked by: [[username1, userid1]]
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just tag me once on discord when youre done, i made many changes so I might've missed or messed something up
nice work 1/2
 

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[SET]
name: Choice Specs
move 1: Psyshock
move 2: Thunderbolt
move 3: Grass Knot
move 4: Trick
item: Choice Specs
ability: Shadow Tag
nature: Modest
evs: 252 SpA / 4 SpD / 252 Spe
tera type: Fairy / Grass

[SET COMMENTS]
Gothitelle is a powerful wallbreaker that enables its teammates by trapping and removing special various walls. It is not just special walls it can remove. Thunderbolt targets Corviknight, Pelipper, Toxapex, and Pelipper while Grass Knot OHKOs Dondozo and defensive Great Tusk, 2HKOs Garganacl, and 2HKOs Ting-Lu and Iron Treads with Tera Grass. I think Iron Treads is imporant to mention as Double Dance Miraidon is a common partner. You could also consider mentioning how Thunderbolt hits Alomomola and Grass Knot hits Hippowdon. Psyshock is chosen over Psychic in order to more effectively remove Blissey and Clodsire. Trick is a decent midground option that lets Gothitelle cripple Pokemon that it might not otherwise beat like Tera Steel Ting-Lu and Corviknight but it comes at the cost of greatly reducing its wallbreaking potential, and as such should generally be used sparingly. Tera Fairy is used to trap Miraidon, Walking Wake, and Koraidon locked into their Dragon-type STAB move, and revenge kill weakened Chi-Yu and Chien-Pao locked into a Dark-type STAB move. Alternatively, Tera Grass allows it to 2HKO Ting-Lu the aforementioned Pokemon and weaken strong attacks from Great Tusk, Ting-Lu and Iron Treads. Maybe just reword to something like this to avoid repeating yourself. Gothitelle fits best on balance teams where it can enable powerful win conditions like Miraidon, Koraidon, Iron Bundle, and Chien-Pao, since it removes many of their common checks. Gothitelle is frail and dislikes hard switching into defensive walls, so it greatly appreciates teammates that can provide pivoting support, such as Flip Turn Iron Bundle and U-turn Miraidon, Koraidon, and Corviknight. And U-turn Koraidon? After Gothitelle has picked up a kill, many offensive Pokemon force it out, so standard defensive backbones consisting of Pokemon like Toxapex, Iron Treads, Great Tusk, Clodsire, and Skeledirge are vital alongside Gothitelle.

[CREDITS]
- Written by: [[Geysers, 426798]]
- Quality checked by: [[pichus, 374620], [WrathoftheLeopard, 511181]]
- Grammar checked by: [[username1, userid1]]

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[SET]
name: Choice Specs
move 1: Psyshock
move 2: Thunderbolt
move 3: Grass Knot
move 4: Trick
item: Choice Specs
ability: Shadow Tag
nature: Modest
evs: 252 SpA / 4 SpD / 252 Spe
tera type: Fairy / Grass

[SET COMMENTS]
Gothitelle is a powerful (you could use smth like 'great' instead if desired, but, besides 'powerful' being kinda redundant w 'wallbreaker', i imagine goth is one of the least deserving of 'powerful' relative to other ag wallbreakers. if i'm wrong and it's pretty strong relative to other viable wallbreakers, like, sure, you can ignore this deletion) wallbreaker that enables its teammates by trapping and removing various walls. Thunderbolt targets Corviknight, Alomomola, Toxapex, and Pelipper, (AC) while Grass Knot OHKOs OHKOes Dondozo, Hippowdon, and defensive Great Tusk, 2HKOs 2HKOes Garganacl, and 2HKOs 2HKOes Ting-Lu and Iron Treads with Tera Grass. Psyshock is chosen over Psychic in order to more effectively remove Blissey and Clodsire. Trick is a decent midground option that lets Gothitelle cripple Pokemon that it cripples Pokemon Gothitelle might not otherwise beat, (AC) like Tera Steel Ting-Lu and Corviknight, (AC) but it comes at the cost of greatly reducing its Gothitelle's wallbreaking potential, and as such so it should generally be used sparingly. Tera Fairy is used to trap Miraidon, Walking Wake, and Koraidon locked into their Dragon-type STAB move, and revenge kill moves, and it lets Gothitelle revenge kill weakened Chi-Yu and Chien-Pao locked into a Dark-type STAB move. Alternatively, Tera Grass allows it to 2HKO the aforementioned Pokemon and weaken Ting-Lu and Iron Treads while weakening strong attacks from Great Tusk, Ting-Lu, (AC) and Iron Treads. Gothitelle fits best on balance teams, (AC) where it can enable powerful win conditions make powerful teammates like Miraidon, Koraidon, Iron Bundle, and Chien-Pao into wincons, since it removes many of their common checks. Gothitelle is frail and dislikes hard switching into defensive the walls it seeks to remove, so it greatly appreciates teammates that can provide pivoting support, pivots such as Flip Turn Iron Bundle and U-turn users such as Miraidon, Koraidon, and Corviknight. After Gothitelle has picked up a kill, KO, many offensive Pokemon force it out, so standard defensive backbones consisting of Pokemon like Toxapex, Iron Treads, Great Tusk, Clodsire, and Skeledirge are vital alongside Gothitelle.

[CREDITS]
- Written by: [[Geysers, 426798]]
- Quality checked by: [[pichus, 374620], [WrathoftheLeopard, 511181]]
- Grammar checked by: [[Adeleine, 517429]]
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