You might want to mention Hypno for being the only usable Insomniac, you stated that they're all pretty much useless due to lack of defenses, but Hypno has good special defense and works well against Breloom, and it gets Hypnosis itself. Plus, Wish can be useful. While definitely not one of the best forms of sleep protection, it does fit the role of being sleep immune with reasonable defense.
Aerodactyl and Jolteon both make great starters, Jolteon especially, preferably with HP:ice. (Uh, HP is defined as Hit Points is all over the place.)
Weezing does not have a Rock resist. If it did, I'd be using it instead of Donphan.
You should probably include that every team should have some means of countering Endure-Salac-Flail/Reversal, whether it's in the form of Tyranitar or a Quick attacker, or something that can switch in (Dusclops has the immunities for the job) and status, although those are useless against Substituters. (But Substituters lose to faster pogeyz.)
Aerodactyl and Jolteon both make great starters, Jolteon especially, preferably with HP:ice. (Uh, HP is defined as Hit Points is all over the place.)
Weezing does not have a Rock resist. If it did, I'd be using it instead of Donphan.
You should probably include that every team should have some means of countering Endure-Salac-Flail/Reversal, whether it's in the form of Tyranitar or a Quick attacker, or something that can switch in (Dusclops has the immunities for the job) and status, although those are useless against Substituters. (But Substituters lose to faster pogeyz.)
