LC Dwebble evo

[Bella]

worse than venipede
[SET]
name: Entry Hazard Setter
move 1: Stealth Rock
move 2: Spikes
move 3: Knock Off
move 4: Rock Blast
item: Eviolite
ability: Weak Armor
nature: Jolly
evs: 156 Atk / 116 Def / 236 Spe

[SET COMMENTS]
Dwebble finds a solid niche in LC as an entry hazard setter on hyper offense thanks to having access to both Stealth Rock and Spikes. The combination of Knock Off and Rock Blast gives Dwebble a great matchup against Natu, the tier's most common entry hazard prevention, and makes it hard for Natu to reliably deny its entry hazards. Knock Off gives more utility to Dwebble, crippling lead Pokemon such as Mienfoo and spinners such as Staryu and Drilbur. Counter can be used surprise foes such as Mienfoo, but it is hard to fit. Weak Armor prevents spinners from reliably Dwebble's entry removing hazards. Offensive Pokemon such as Abra, Carvanha and Ponyta as well as setup sweepers like Tyrunt and Agility Porygon, appreciate hazard support from Dwebble to help overwhelm their checks such as Ferroseed and Staryu. Grookey threatens Staryu and can revenge kill weakened foes with Grassy Glide.
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[SET]
name: Eviolite
move 1: Stealth Rock
move 2: Spikes
move 3: Knock Off
move 4: Rock Blast
item: Eviolite
ability: Weak Armor
nature: Jolly
evs: 36 HP / 236 Atk / 236 Spe
156 Atk/ 116 Def/ 236 Spe
Reason for this is that Rock Blast rolls don't change with 156 Atk vs 236 on Natu. Additional Investment into Defense allows it to reliably live Fake Out into HJK from Foo and set up multiple hazards. HP isn't too much of a concern due to you dying to special attackers anyway, you want your weak armor procs.

[SET COMMENTS]
Dwebble has a niche as an entry hazard-stacker with its ability Weak Armor, which makes Dwebble faster than the entire metagame after being hit by one Physical move. Thanks to access to a Rock-Type STAB in Rock Blast, Dwebble has a great matchup against Natu, the tiers most common entry hazard prevention preventer. Rapid Spin attempts will give you weak armor's speed boost, allowing you to outspeed a spinner and set hazards(The rapid spin part can likely be changed/excluded, felt it was worth mentioning). Knock Off gives more utility to Dwebble, removing items from Pokemon such as Mienfoo and Mareanie (possibly add some text in here about why remocing mienfoo and maranie is good, such as Mienfoo checking so much and Mareanie's defensive prowess). This set should only be seen on Hyper Offense as a lead, setting up entry hazards so teammates can apply pressure on the opponent to prevent the removal of one's entry hazards (feels a bit redundant to say hazards twice, but your point still stands that you keep going hard into the enemy to make sure they don't have time to remove hazards). 116 Defense allows Dwebble to reliably live Mienfoo's Fake Out into HJK, allowing it to set up both Spikes and Stealth Rock, while the Speed and Attack investment allow it to break Natu Reliably and deal good damage with Knock Off.

Offensive Pokemon, such as Abra, Carvanha and Ponyta appreciate hazard support from Dwebble to help overwhelm their checks, such as Ferroseed and Staryu. Setup sweepers, such as Tyrunt or Agility Porygon, also appreciate entry hazards spreading damage on their checks. Grookey and Carvanha are good partners due to threatening out Staryu and Abra, as both outspeed Dwebble and threaten it on its significantly weaker special defense and deny weak armor boosts. Mudbray can also be used to ward off Rock Blast Users in Archen and Onix hoping to overwhelm Dwebble by using Rock Blast to get numerous Weak Armor Procs while threatening both out.

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- Written by: [[uhBella, 567483]
- Quality checked by: [[username1, userid1]]
- Grammar checked by: [[username1, userid1]]

You have a good core idea of what the set does, just needs a bit of ironing out and following the analysis format a little bit more.

 

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[SET]
name: Eviolite
move 1: Stealth Rock
move 2: Spikes
move 3: Knock Off
move 4: Rock Blast
item: Eviolite
ability: Weak Armor
nature: Jolly
evs: 36 HP / 236 Atk / 236 Spe
156 Atk/ 116 Def/ 236 Spe
Reason for this is that Rock Blast rolls don't change with 156 Atk vs 236 on Natu. Additional Investment into Defense allows it to reliably live Fake Out into HJK from Foo and set up multiple hazards. HP isn't too much of a concern due to you dying to special attackers anyway, you want your weak armor procs.

[SET COMMENTS]
Dwebble has a niche as an entry hazard-stacker with its ability Weak Armor, which makes Dwebble faster than the entire metagame after being hit by one Physical move. Thanks to access to a Rock-Type STAB in Rock Blast, Dwebble has a great matchup against Natu, the tiers most common entry hazard prevention preventer. Rapid Spin attempts will give you weak armor's speed boost, allowing you to outspeed a spinner and set hazards(The rapid spin part can likely be changed/excluded, felt it was worth mentioning). Knock Off gives more utility to Dwebble, removing items from Pokemon such as Mienfoo and Mareanie (possibly add some text in here about why remocing mienfoo and maranie is good, such as Mienfoo checking so much and Mareanie's defensive prowess). This set should only be seen on Hyper Offense as a lead, setting up entry hazards so teammates can apply pressure on the opponent to prevent the removal of one's entry hazards (feels a bit redundant to say hazards twice, but your point still stands that you keep going hard into the enemy to make sure they don't have time to remove hazards). 116 Defense allows Dwebble to reliably live Mienfoo's Fake Out into HJK, allowing it to set up both Spikes and Stealth Rock, while the Speed and Attack investment allow it to break Natu Reliably and deal good damage with Knock Off.

Offensive Pokemon, such as Abra, Carvanha and Ponyta appreciate hazard support from Dwebble to help overwhelm their checks, such as Ferroseed and Staryu. Setup sweepers, such as Tyrunt or Agility Porygon, also appreciate entry hazards spreading damage on their checks. Grookey and Carvanha are good partners due to threatening out Staryu and Abra, as both outspeed Dwebble and threaten it on its significantly weaker special defense and deny weak armor boosts. Mudbray can also be used to ward off Rock Blast Users in Archen and Onix hoping to overwhelm Dwebble by using Rock Blast to get numerous Weak Armor Procs while threatening both out.

[CREDITS]
- Written by: [[uhBella, 567483]
- Quality checked by: [[username1, userid1]]
- Grammar checked by: [[username1, userid1]]

You have a good core idea of what the set does, just needs a bit of ironing out and following the analysis format a little bit more.

inplemented

 

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Rock Bug

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[SET]
name: Eviolite
move 1: Stealth Rock
move 2: Spikes
move 3: Knock Off
move 4: Rock Blast
item: Eviolite
ability: Weak Armor
nature: Jolly
evs: 156 Atk/ 116 Def/ 236 Spe - Fix this pls

[SET COMMENTS]
Dwebble has a niche as an entry hazard-stacker with its ability Weak Armor, which makes Dwebble faster than the entire metagame after being hit by one Physical move. (This is inaccurate. Yes, Weak Armor is part of its kit, but Dwebble's niche comes from the fact that it has access to both Stealth Rock and Spikes.) Thanks to access to a strong Rock-Type STAB in Rock Blast, Dwebble has a great matchup against Natu, the tiers most common entry hazard prevention. Knock Off gives more utility to Dwebble, removing items from Pokemon such as Mienfoo and Mareanie.(Important thing to mention here is that Knock Off + Rock Blast makes it difficult for Natu to reliably deny Dwebble's entry hazards. Also mention that Knock Off cripples leads like Mienfoo and spinners like Staryu and Drilbur.) This set should only be seen on Hyper Offense as a lead, setting up entry hazards so teammates can apply pressure on the opponent.(This should be an overview sentence.) Discuss Weak Armor and how it prevents spinners from reliably removing Dwebble's entry hazards. Mention Counter and how it can be used to surprise foes like Mienfoo. Offensive Pokemon such as Abra, Carvanha and Ponyta as well as setup sweepers like Tyrunt and Agility Porygon appreciate hazard support from Dwebble to help overwhelm their checks, such as Ferroseed and Staryu. Setup sweepers, such as Tyrunt or Agility Porygon, also appreciate entry hazards spreading damage on their checks. Grookey and Carvanha are good partners due to threatening out Staryu and Abra, as both outspeed Dwebble and threaten it on its significantly weaker special defense and deny weak armor boosts. (The last sentence is confusing. Just mention Grookey and how it beats Staryu + revenge kills foes.)

[CREDITS]
- Written by: [[uhBella, 567483]] (add bracket)
- Quality checked by: [[username1, userid1]]
- Grammar checked by: [[username1, userid1]]

Tag me when you implement this so I can stamp it.

EDIT: QC 1/1

 

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Rock Bug

worse than venipede
[SET]
name: Eviolite
move 1: Stealth Rock
move 2: Spikes
move 3: Knock Off
move 4: Rock Blast
item: Eviolite
ability: Weak Armor
nature: Jolly
evs: 156 Atk/ 116 Def/ 236 Spe - Fix this pls

[SET COMMENTS]
Dwebble has a niche as an entry hazard-stacker with its ability Weak Armor, which makes Dwebble faster than the entire metagame after being hit by one Physical move. (This is inaccurate. Yes, Weak Armor is part of its kit, but Dwebble's niche comes from the fact that it has access to both Stealth Rock and Spikes.) Thanks to access to a strong Rock-Type STAB in Rock Blast, Dwebble has a great matchup against Natu, the tiers most common entry hazard prevention. Knock Off gives more utility to Dwebble, removing items from Pokemon such as Mienfoo and Mareanie.(Important thing to mention here is that Knock Off + Rock Blast makes it difficult for Natu to reliably deny Dwebble's entry hazards. Also mention that Knock Off cripples leads like Mienfoo and spinners like Staryu and Drilbur.) This set should only be seen on Hyper Offense as a lead, setting up entry hazards so teammates can apply pressure on the opponent.(This should be an overview sentence.) Discuss Weak Armor and how it prevents spinners from reliably removing Dwebble's entry hazards. Mention Counter and how it can be used to surprise foes like Mienfoo. Offensive Pokemon such as Abra, Carvanha and Ponyta as well as setup sweepers like Tyrunt and Agility Porygon appreciate hazard support from Dwebble to help overwhelm their checks, such as Ferroseed and Staryu. Setup sweepers, such as Tyrunt or Agility Porygon, also appreciate entry hazards spreading damage on their checks. Grookey and Carvanha are good partners due to threatening out Staryu and Abra, as both outspeed Dwebble and threaten it on its significantly weaker special defense and deny weak armor boosts. (The last sentence is confusing. Just mention Grookey and how it beats Staryu + revenge kills foes.)

[CREDITS]
- Written by: [[uhBella, 567483]] (add bracket)
- Quality checked by: [[username1, userid1]]
- Grammar checked by: [[username1, userid1]]

Tag me when you implement this so I can stamp it.

implemented this!

 

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this is ready for a gp GP Team

 

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Rock Bug

worse than venipede
[SET]
name: Entry Hazard Setter
move 1: Stealth Rock
move 2: Spikes
move 3: Knock Off
move 4: Rock Blast
item: Eviolite
ability: Weak Armor
nature: Jolly
evs: 156 Atk / 116 Def / 236 Spe

[SET COMMENTS]
Dweeble Dwebble finds a solid niche in LC as an entry hazard setter on hyper offense thanks to having rare access to both Stealth Rock and Spikes. Thanks to access to a strong Rock-Type STAB in Rock Blast, Dwebble has a great matchup against Natu, the tiers most common entry hazard prevention, as its combination of Knock Off and Rock Blast makes it hard for Natu to switch in to deny entry hazards. The combination of Knock Off and Rock Blast gives Dwebble a great matchup against Natu, the tier's most common entry hazard prevention, and makes it hard for Natu to reliably deny its entry hazards. Knock Off gives more utility to Dwebble, removing items from crippling lead Pokemon such as Mienfoo and spinners(lowercase) such as Drilbur and Staryu and Drilbur. Counter can be used as an option to surprise kill foes such as Mienfoo, but its it is hard to fit. Weak Armor prevents spinners from reliably removing Dwebble's entry hazards. Offensive Pokemon such as Abra, Carvanha,(AC) and Ponyta,(AC) as well as setup sweepers like Tyrunt and Agility Porygon,(AC, remove space) appreciate hazard support from Dwebble to help overwhelm their checks,(RC) such as Ferroseed and Staryu. Grookey is also a great partner, as it threatens out the tiers most common spinner in Staryu and can revenge kill foes after Dweeble has fainted. Grookey threatens Staryu and can revenge kill weakened foes with Grassy Glide.

[CREDITS]
- Written by: [[uhBella, 567483]]
- Quality checked by: [[DC, 449990]]
- Grammar checked by: [[username1, userid1]]

GP 1/1. [DC, 449990]. Implement this carefully please.

 

[Bella]

implemented this, and we are done here!