Copyediting Celesteela (Flying) (GP 0/1)

[CaptainDaimyo]

[SET]
Celesteela @ Leftovers
Name: Physically Defensive (Flying)
Ability: Beast Boost
EVs: 248 HP / 212 Def / 48 SpD
Relaxed / Impish Nature
- Heavy Slam
- Leech Seed
- Protect
- Toxic / Air Slash / Flamethrower

[SET COMMENTS]
With amazing defensive typing and defensive stats, Celesteela is a great wall on Flying teams, taking hits from the likes of Iron Boulder, Weavile, and Mega Diancie. Celesteela takes advantage of its weight to threaten Rock-, Ice-, and Fairy-types such as Ogerpon-C, Nihilego, Weavile, and Tapu Lele. Leech Seed provides additional recovery for Celesteela on top of Leftovers and wear down foes that lack recovery like Barraskewda and Latias. Protect allows Celesteela both guaranteed recovery from Leftovers and scout moves from Choice-locked foes like Blacephalon and Zeraora. Toxic spreads status to foes on top of Leech Seed, wearing down walls such as Mantine in the process. Air Slash threatens Fighting- and Grass-types such as Mega Gallade, Keldeo, and Hisuian Lilligant. Flamethrower threatens the aforementioned Grass-types as well as Steel-types like Gholdengo, Ferrothorn, and Corviknight. 248 HP and 48 Special Defense EVs allow Celesteela to avoid a 2HKO from Choice Specs Greninja's Ice Beam and Choice Scarf Iron Valiant's Thunderbolt, and the remaining are invested into Defense so it can take hits from Mega Lopunny and Mega Gallade. Mantine is a great specially defensive wall that forms a defensive pairing with Celesteela, and its Water-typing and its ability Water Absorb makes it great against Fire- and Water- types like Volcarona, Mega Charizard Y, and Urshifu-R. Gliscor is another great defensive partner, as its Ground-typing and STAB Earthquake makes it an important asset in the Electric matchup, and it helps Celesteela make progress against opposing teams with entry hazards, status spreading with Toxic, and removing items with Knock Off. Landorus makes for another great teammate, as it threatens Fire- and Electric-types that Celesteela dislikes such as Heatran, Ceruledge, and Raging Bolt. In return, it appreciates Celesteela taking off pressure from Landorus by checking Ice- and Fairy-types like Weavile, Iron Valiant, and Alolan Ninetales. Galarian Moltres and Dragonite appreciate Celesteela removing threats to them such as Enamorus and Ogerpon-C so they can start their own sweeping. In return, Galarian Moltres takes out Ghost-types like Ceruledge and Blacephalon for Celesteela, while Dragonite handles Steel- and Electric-types such as Heatran, Magnezone, and Raging Bolt.

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[CaptainDaimyo]

[SET]
Celesteela @ Leftovers
Name: Physically Defensive (Flying)
Ability: Beast Boost
EVs: 248 HP / 212 Def / 48 SpD
Relaxed / Impish Nature
- Heavy Slam
- Leech Seed
- Protect
- Toxic / Air Slash / Flamethrower

[SET COMMENTS]
With great defensive typing and defensive stats, Celesteela is a great wall on Flying teams, taking hits from the likes of Iron Boulder, Weavile, and Mega Diancie. Celesteela takes advantage of its weight to threaten Rock, Ice-, and Fairy-types such as Ogerpon-C, Nihilego, Weavile, and Tapu Lele. Leech Seed provides additional recovery for Celesteela on top of Leftovers and wear down foes that lack recovery. Protect allows Celesteela both guaranteed recovery from Leftovers and scout moves from Choice-locked foes like Blacephalon and Zeraora. Toxic grants Celesteela an additional way of wearing down foes on top of Leech Seed, especially against most Grass-types that are not affected by it. Air Slash threatens Fighting- and Grass-types such as Mega Gallade, Keldeo, Meowscarada, and Celebi. Flamethrower threatens the aforementioned Grass-types as well as Steel-types like Gholdengo, Ferrothorn, and Corviknight. 248 HP and 48 Special Defense EVs allow Celesteela to avoid a 2HKO from Choice Specs Greninja's Ice Beam. Mantine is a great specially defensive wall that forms a defensive pairing with Celesteela, and its Water-typing and ability makes it great against Fire- and Water-types like Volcarona, Mega Charizard Y, Greninja, and Manaphy. Gliscor is another great defensive partner, as its Ground-typing makes it an important asset in the Electric matchup, and it helps Celesteela make progress against opposing teams with its entry hazards. Landorus makes for another great teammate, as it checks Fire- and Electric-types that Celesteela dislikes such as Heatran, Ceruledge, and Magnezone. In return, it appreciates Celesteela taking off pressure from Landorus checking Fairy-types like Tapu Bulu and Clefable. Galarian Moltres and Dragonite appreciate Celesteela removing threats to them such as Enamorus and Ogerpon-C so they can start their own sweeping.

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QC ready (this is my first time writing for a defensive pokemon so idk if its ayt :(()

 

[Elvira]

reserving for amqc

 

[Elvira]

[SET]
Celesteela @ Leftovers
Name: Physically Defensive (Flying)
Ability: Beast Boost
EVs: 248 HP / 212 Def / 48 SpD
Relaxed / Impish Nature
- Heavy Slam
- Leech Seed
- Protect
- Toxic / Air Slash / Flamethrower

[SET COMMENTS]
With great defensive typing and defensive stats, Celesteela is a great wall on Flying teams, taking hits from the likes of Iron Boulder, Weavile, and Mega Diancie. Celesteela takes advantage of its weight to threaten Rock- (When you are specifying types, please remember to always add a hyphen.) , Ice-, and Fairy-types such as Ogerpon-C, Nihilego, Weavile, and Tapu Lele. Leech Seed provides additional recovery for Celesteela on top of Leftovers and wear down foes that lack recovery. Protect allows Celesteela both guaranteed recovery from Leftovers and scout moves from Choice-locked foes like Blacephalon and Zeraora. Toxic grants Celesteela an additional way of wearing down (spreads status to) foes on top of Leech Seed, especially against most Grass-types that are not affected by it (What are some good examples of grass types that it can hit with toxic?). Air Slash threatens Fighting- and Grass-types such as Mega Gallade, Keldeo, Meowscarada, and Celebi. Flamethrower threatens the aforementioned Grass-types (With this statement, air slash is already a very reliable form of STAB versus them. Here we can provide a few more examples of Grass-types.) as well as Steel-types like Gholdengo, Ferrothorn, and Corviknight. 248 HP and 48 Special Defense EVs allow Celesteela to avoid a 2HKO from Choice Specs Greninja's Ice Beam (Add another example of what this specific build can handle.) . Mantine is a great specially defensive wall that forms a defensive pairing with Celesteela, and its Water-typing and ability makes it great against Fire- and Water-types it's ability Water Absorb, it makes it great against Fire- and Water- types (If you bring up Mantine's ability, note what it is) like Volcarona, Mega Charizard Y, Greninja (Greninja was already used with Celesteela, we can add another example here.) , and Manaphy. Gliscor is another great defensive partner, as its Ground-typing makes it an important asset in the Electric matchup, and it helps Celesteela make progress against opposing teams with its entry hazards (with this section, you dont exactly have to remove all of it. I would give a few examples of what Gliscor can do to make the progress. Specify knock off, stealth rocks/spikes, toxic, earthquake, practically anything it can safely switch into and handle for celesteela during the Electric matchup.). Landorus (Which Landorus Form? As there is Therian which has Intimidate and Incarnate which has sheer force) makes for another great teammate, as it checks Fire- and Electric-types that Celesteela dislikes such as Heatran, Ceruledge, and Magnezone (How does Landorus check these mons? Specify what moves it can use to take these possible threats out). In return, it appreciates Celesteela taking off pressure from Landorus checking Fairy-types like Tapu Bulu and Clefable. Galarian Moltres and Dragonite appreciate Celesteela removing threats to them such as Enamorus and Ogerpon-C so they can start their own sweeping. (When speaking on two separate mons, I would specify what Galarian Moltres can break through as well as Dragonite to help Celesteela more.)

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overall, great job. QC team is next.

 

[CaptainDaimyo]

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overall, great job. QC team is next.

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[Neko]

bamboo car

[SET]
Celesteela @ Leftovers
Name: Physically Defensive (Flying)
Ability: Beast Boost
EVs: 248 HP / 212 Def / 48 SpD
Relaxed / Impish Nature
- Heavy Slam
- Leech Seed
- Protect
- Toxic / Air Slash / Flamethrower

[SET COMMENTS]
With great defensive typing and defensive stats, Celesteela is a great (great used twice in the same sentence, you can probably change great here to something else) wall on Flying teams, taking hits from the likes of Iron Boulder, Weavile, and Mega Diancie. Celesteela takes advantage of its weight to threaten Rock-, Ice-, and Fairy-types such as Ogerpon-C, Nihilego, Weavile, and Tapu Lele. Leech Seed provides additional recovery for Celesteela on top of Leftovers and wear down foes that lack recovery. Protect allows Celesteela both guaranteed recovery from Leftovers and scout moves from Choice-locked foes like Blacephalon and Zeraora. Toxic spreads status to foes on top of Leech Seed, especially against most Grass-types like Ogerpon-C, Hisuian Lilligant, and Meowscarada (Celes due to her usually having Flamethrower doesnt draw in Grasses usually. You could mention Toxic generically tho, since Celes herself forces lots of switchies. Eg. Flying with Mantine is usually gonna go mantine on Celes and try to threaten Celes with a scald burn. If you toxic it then the opposing Flying team might get in trouble vs Celes' specially attacking team mates) that are not affected by it. Air Slash threatens Fighting- and Grass-types such as Mega Gallade, Keldeo, Meowscarada, and Celebi (Add Hisuian Lil over Celebi and Meow imo [Meow isnt a Grass type most of the time even]). Flamethrower threatens the aforementioned Grass-types as well as Steel-types like Gholdengo, Ferrothorn, and Corviknight. 248 HP and 48 Special Defense EVs allow Celesteela to avoid a 2HKO from Choice Specs Greninja's Ice Beam and Choice Scarf Iron Valiant's Thunderbolt (while the remaining are given to def so that it stands a change vs something like Mega Lopunny/M.Gallade). Mantine is a great specially defensive wall that forms a defensive pairing with Celesteela, and its Water-typing and its ability Water Absorb makes it great against Fire- and Water- types like Volcarona, Mega Charizard Y, and Manaphy (get someone else). Gliscor is another great defensive partner, as its Ground-typing and STAB Earthquake makes it an important asset in the Electric matchup, and it helps Celesteela make progress against opposing teams with Stealth Rock and Spikes, status spreading with Toxic, and removing items with Knock Off. Landorus makes for another great teammate, as it checks threatens Fire- and Electric-types that Celesteela dislikes such as Heatran, Ceruledge, and Raging BoltMagnezone. In return, it appreciates Celesteela taking off pressure from Landorus checking Fairy-types like Tapu Bulu and Clefable. Galarian Moltres and Dragonite appreciate Celesteela removing threats to them such as Enamorus and Ogerpon-C so they can start their own sweeping. In return, Galarian Moltres takes out Ghost-types like Ceruledge and Blacephalon for Celesteela, while Dragonite handles Steel- and Electric-types such as Heatran, Magnezone, and Raging Bolt.

[CREDITS]
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QC 1/2

 

[CaptainDaimyo]

bamboo car

[SET]
Celesteela @ Leftovers
Name: Physically Defensive (Flying)
Ability: Beast Boost
EVs: 248 HP / 212 Def / 48 SpD
Relaxed / Impish Nature
- Heavy Slam
- Leech Seed
- Protect
- Toxic / Air Slash / Flamethrower

[SET COMMENTS]
With great defensive typing and defensive stats, Celesteela is a great (great used twice in the same sentence, you can probably change great here to something else) wall on Flying teams, taking hits from the likes of Iron Boulder, Weavile, and Mega Diancie. Celesteela takes advantage of its weight to threaten Rock-, Ice-, and Fairy-types such as Ogerpon-C, Nihilego, Weavile, and Tapu Lele. Leech Seed provides additional recovery for Celesteela on top of Leftovers and wear down foes that lack recovery. Protect allows Celesteela both guaranteed recovery from Leftovers and scout moves from Choice-locked foes like Blacephalon and Zeraora. Toxic spreads status to foes on top of Leech Seed, especially against most Grass-types like Ogerpon-C, Hisuian Lilligant, and Meowscarada (Celes due to her usually having Flamethrower doesnt draw in Grasses usually. You could mention Toxic generically tho, since Celes herself forces lots of switchies. Eg. Flying with Mantine is usually gonna go mantine on Celes and try to threaten Celes with a scald burn. If you toxic it then the opposing Flying team might get in trouble vs Celes' specially attacking team mates) that are not affected by it. Air Slash threatens Fighting- and Grass-types such as Mega Gallade, Keldeo, Meowscarada, and Celebi (Add Hisuian Lil over Celebi and Meow imo [Meow isnt a Grass type most of the time even]). Flamethrower threatens the aforementioned Grass-types as well as Steel-types like Gholdengo, Ferrothorn, and Corviknight. 248 HP and 48 Special Defense EVs allow Celesteela to avoid a 2HKO from Choice Specs Greninja's Ice Beam and Choice Scarf Iron Valiant's Thunderbolt (while the remaining are given to def so that it stands a change vs something like Mega Lopunny/M.Gallade). Mantine is a great specially defensive wall that forms a defensive pairing with Celesteela, and its Water-typing and its ability Water Absorb makes it great against Fire- and Water- types like Volcarona, Mega Charizard Y, and Manaphy (get someone else). Gliscor is another great defensive partner, as its Ground-typing and STAB Earthquake makes it an important asset in the Electric matchup, and it helps Celesteela make progress against opposing teams with Stealth Rock and Spikes, status spreading with Toxic, and removing items with Knock Off. Landorus makes for another great teammate, as it checks threatens Fire- and Electric-types that Celesteela dislikes such as Heatran, Ceruledge, and Raging BoltMagnezone. In return, it appreciates Celesteela taking off pressure from Landorus checking Fairy-types like Tapu Bulu and Clefable. Galarian Moltres and Dragonite appreciate Celesteela removing threats to them such as Enamorus and Ogerpon-C so they can start their own sweeping. In return, Galarian Moltres takes out Ghost-types like Ceruledge and Blacephalon for Celesteela, while Dragonite handles Steel- and Electric-types such as Heatran, Magnezone, and Raging Bolt.

[CREDITS]
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QC 1/2

Implemented

 

[boomp]

QC 2/2

[SET]
Celesteela @ Leftovers
Name: Physically Defensive (Flying)
Ability: Beast Boost
EVs: 248 HP / 212 Def / 48 SpD
Relaxed / Impish Nature
- Heavy Slam
- Leech Seed
- Protect
- Toxic / Air Slash / Flamethrower

[SET COMMENTS]
With amazing defensive typing and defensive stats, Celesteela is a great wall on Flying teams, taking hits from the likes of Iron Boulder, Weavile, and Mega Diancie. Celesteela takes advantage of its weight to threaten Rock-, Ice-, and Fairy-types such as Ogerpon-C, Nihilego, Weavile, and Tapu Lele. Leech Seed provides additional recovery for Celesteela on top of Leftovers and wear down foes that lack recovery [provide some examples.]. Protect allows Celesteela both guaranteed recovery from Leftovers and scout moves from Choice-locked foes like Blacephalon and Zeraora. Toxic spreads status to foes on top of Leech Seed, wearing down walls such as Mantine in the process. Air Slash threatens Fighting- and Grass-types such as Mega Gallade, Keldeo, and Hisuian Lilligant. Flamethrower threatens the aforementioned Grass-types as well as Steel-types like Gholdengo, Ferrothorn, and Corviknight. 248 HP and 48 Special Defense EVs allow Celesteela to avoid a 2HKO from Choice Specs Greninja's Ice Beam and Choice Scarf Iron Valiant's Thunderbolt, and the remaining are invested into Defense so it can take hits from Mega Lopunny and Mega Gallade. Mantine is a great specially defensive wall that forms a defensive pairing with Celesteela, and its Water-typing and its ability Water Absorb makes it great against Fire- and Water- types like Volcarona, Mega Charizard Y, and Urshifu-R. Gliscor is another great defensive partner, as its Ground-typing and STAB Earthquake makes it an important asset in the Electric matchup, and it helps Celesteela make progress against opposing teams with entry hazards Stealth Rock and Spikes, status spreading with Toxic, and removing items with Knock Off. Landorus makes for another great teammate, as it threatens Fire- and Electric-types that Celesteela dislikes such as Heatran, Ceruledge, and Raging Bolt. In return, it appreciates Celesteela taking off pressure from Landorus by checking Ice- and Fairy-types like Weavile, Iron Valiant, and Alolan Ninetales Tapu Bulu and Clefable. Galarian Moltres and Dragonite appreciate Celesteela removing threats to them such as Enamorus and Ogerpon-C so they can start their own sweeping. In return, Galarian Moltres takes out Ghost-types like Ceruledge and Blacephalon for Celesteela, while Dragonite handles Steel- and Electric-types such as Heatran, Magnezone, and Raging Bolt.

[CREDITS]
Written by:
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/captaindaimyo.602431/
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QC 2/2 Great Job

 

[CaptainDaimyo]

QC 2/2

[SET]
Celesteela @ Leftovers
Name: Physically Defensive (Flying)
Ability: Beast Boost
EVs: 248 HP / 212 Def / 48 SpD
Relaxed / Impish Nature
- Heavy Slam
- Leech Seed
- Protect
- Toxic / Air Slash / Flamethrower

[SET COMMENTS]
With amazing defensive typing and defensive stats, Celesteela is a great wall on Flying teams, taking hits from the likes of Iron Boulder, Weavile, and Mega Diancie. Celesteela takes advantage of its weight to threaten Rock-, Ice-, and Fairy-types such as Ogerpon-C, Nihilego, Weavile, and Tapu Lele. Leech Seed provides additional recovery for Celesteela on top of Leftovers and wear down foes that lack recovery [provide some examples.]. Protect allows Celesteela both guaranteed recovery from Leftovers and scout moves from Choice-locked foes like Blacephalon and Zeraora. Toxic spreads status to foes on top of Leech Seed, wearing down walls such as Mantine in the process. Air Slash threatens Fighting- and Grass-types such as Mega Gallade, Keldeo, and Hisuian Lilligant. Flamethrower threatens the aforementioned Grass-types as well as Steel-types like Gholdengo, Ferrothorn, and Corviknight. 248 HP and 48 Special Defense EVs allow Celesteela to avoid a 2HKO from Choice Specs Greninja's Ice Beam and Choice Scarf Iron Valiant's Thunderbolt, and the remaining are invested into Defense so it can take hits from Mega Lopunny and Mega Gallade. Mantine is a great specially defensive wall that forms a defensive pairing with Celesteela, and its Water-typing and its ability Water Absorb makes it great against Fire- and Water- types like Volcarona, Mega Charizard Y, and Urshifu-R. Gliscor is another great defensive partner, as its Ground-typing and STAB Earthquake makes it an important asset in the Electric matchup, and it helps Celesteela make progress against opposing teams with entry hazards Stealth Rock and Spikes, status spreading with Toxic, and removing items with Knock Off. Landorus makes for another great teammate, as it threatens Fire- and Electric-types that Celesteela dislikes such as Heatran, Ceruledge, and Raging Bolt. In return, it appreciates Celesteela taking off pressure from Landorus by checking Ice- and Fairy-types like Weavile, Iron Valiant, and Alolan Ninetales Tapu Bulu and Clefable. Galarian Moltres and Dragonite appreciate Celesteela removing threats to them such as Enamorus and Ogerpon-C so they can start their own sweeping. In return, Galarian Moltres takes out Ghost-types like Ceruledge and Blacephalon for Celesteela, while Dragonite handles Steel- and Electric-types such as Heatran, Magnezone, and Raging Bolt.

[CREDITS]
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QC 2/2 Great Job

Ty GP Team

 

[RodentTamer]

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Checked by the rat god

[SET]
Celesteela @ Leftovers
Name: Physically Defensive (Flying)
Ability: Beast Boost
EVs: 248 HP / 212 Def / 48 SpD
Relaxed / Impish Nature
- Heavy Slam
- Leech Seed
- Protect
- Toxic / Air Slash / Flamethrower

With an amazing defensive typing and defensive stats, Celesteela is a great wall on Flying teams, capable of taking hits from the likes of Iron Boulder, Weavile, and Mega Diancie. Celesteela takes advantage of its weight to threaten Rock-, Ice-, and Fairy-types such as Ogerpon-C, Nihilego, Weavile, and Tapu Lele. Leech Seed provides additional recovery for Celesteela on top of Leftovers, (AC) and wear wears down foes that lack recovery like Barraskewda and Latias. Protect allows Celesteela both guaranteed recovery from Leftovers and the ability to scout moves from Choice-locked foes like such as Blacephalon and Zeraora. Toxic spreads status to foes on top of Leech Seed, wearing down walls such as Mantine in the process. (You can anlso mention Slowbro since Celesteela can’t do much to it with Heavy Slam, and Toxic REALLY wears Slowbro down, which could lead to a switch out) Air Slash threatens Fighting- and Grass-types such as Mega Gallade, Keldeo, and Hisuian Lilligant. Flamethrower threatens the aforementioned Grass-types as well as and Steel-types like Gholdengo, Ferrothorn, and Corviknight. 248 HP and 48 Special Defense EVs allow Celesteela to avoid a 2HKO from Choice Specs Greninja's Ice Beam and Choice Scarf Iron Valiant's Thunderbolt, and the remaining are invested into Defense so it can take hits from Mega Lopunny and Mega Gallade with the remaining invested into Defense so it can take hits from both Mega Lopunny and Mega Gallade. Mantine is a great specially defensive wall that forms a defensive pairing with Celesteela, and its Water-typing and its ability, (AC) Water Absorb, (AC) makes make it great against Fire- and Water- types like Volcarona, Mega Charizard Y, and Urshifu-R. Gliscor is another great defensive partner, as its part Ground-typing and STAB move Earthquake makes it an important asset in the Electric matchup matchups, and it helps Celesteela make progress against opposing teams with entry hazards, status spreading with Toxic, and removing items with Knock Off. (RP) ,(AC) while Landorus makes for another great teammate, as it threatens Fire- and Electric-types that Celesteela dislikes such as Heatran, Ceruledge, and Raging Bolt. In return, it Landorus appreciates Celesteela taking off pressure from Landorus it by checking Ice- and Fairy-types like Weavile, Iron Valiant, and Alolan Ninetales. Galarian Moltres and Dragonite appreciate Celesteela removing threats to towards them such as Enamorus and Ogerpon-C,(AC) so they can start their own sweeping. In return, Galarian Moltres takes out Ghost-types like Ceruledge and Blacephalon for Celesteela, while Dragonite handles Steel- and Electric-types such as Heatran, Magnezone, and Raging Bolt.

[CREDITS]
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